Piiiiza
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Piiiiza7 months agoCommenté- Piiiizaa year agoCommenté
Man... Two words. Nine-
- Piiiiza2 years agoCommenté
What're u doing here?
Ce livre a été supprimé. - Piiiiza2 years agoRépondu à Columbo
Spectacular.
- Piiiiza3 years agoRépondu à PidgeonKing
yes
- Piiiiza3 years agoRépondu à Overking1974
No only 1
- Piiiiza3 years agoRépondu à Dragon_Incarnation
Thx
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - Piiiiza3 years agoRépondu à Dragon_Incarnation
Life. Did I accidently say light in a paragraph?
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - Piiiiza3 years agoRépondu à Zailo95
Ikr. This author is very late. Even when they said 'daily chapters.'
- Piiiiza3 years agoPosté
I'm giving my honest review of my story. The writing quality is bad, and seems to lack actual motivation. Update Quality is ok. Story Development right now is weird. When they start travelling, not even that far in to it, and Ruby has already *Spoiler* It's seems a little to fast-paced. Character design is not doing it. He's barely shown interacting with other characters, apart from the System and Ruby. There are some small talks between Clarent, but that's it. World Background.... Heh.
