Do what make you continue to enjoy writing let those that nitpick F off as it is your story to tell. Just know there are also silent readers that enjoy the story you are bringing out no matter whether it 10 chapters or 100

Not a bad price if that includes both lessons and renting in the city average cost would be 120 - 200$ for a 2-3 day (2 hr avg a day) course with gun rental included but ammo separate

Strength is spelled wrong

I’m loving the progression so far but while overpowered this has the makings of the core story going off track quickly so all I can say is keep up the good work but try to stay contientious of the larger impact of his every action as 1000 time positive buff could be inferred in more than just a direct way

this is late but shouldn’t his magic not work in this reality as the weave wouldn’t be available similar to the times it was broken instead it would be primal magic that is self learn/ domain powers typically set for above level 20 another thought is magic limitations aren’t magic but mental limitations wich would be idicative of spell slots but limitations aren’t there when recast by some dnd spell rules or time passage similar to short rest

Is it no harem plz…?

Sell a horcrux you get 1 gold…

Can’t wait for the stories that your furture holds best of luck on your next steps in life

Update?

It’s adding some filler that’s needed for future development even if it’s short

I don’t know why but this made me giggle with excitement at the hellscape that will be made of demons and angels in the future and how Ashton can show both unending hope for friends yet still show he lost his humanity in the wasteland to become a devil who punishes all those who have crossed him...

First off let me say I’m loving the progression so far but the use of creating skills I think is undervalued or naively applied by the MC. while the skills amplifying each other are great, other than the first four transcendent skills there is much to be desired as evolvable skill would be a clearer route or no class related skill creation. As passive skills like breathing gives energy like cultivating or core consumption allowing the MC a chance at new skills without creating them himself. As this would bring him slowly closer to a godkilling monster. But this is just my thoughts take it as you will. Another way is as the MC progresses less random/naive creation of skills or slower creation/merging of skills could also show the MC growth. Thanks for the chapters

I like the premise of the story and the starting lineup but there is confusion for what is Krilo in different chapters and who specifically is talking as he seems to be both human and summoned beast but no clear distinction on background yet these 23 chapters could turn into 50 if the pace was more drawn out and expanded on

Or if you take the implication of Hodur’s heir it could mean he is Hodur’s heir and replaces him as he has no clear descendants before his fall in mythology

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A new magic for non damaging could be something like illusionary pain that activates all receptors but doesn’t kill or soul magic which seem to tie into spirit magic. But I love what’s written so far

Got my hopes up… happy April fools anyway

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When did this turn into a one piece cross over?…

I didn’t know walls eat plankton i thought whales did