Aushin
I'm an aspiring author who mostly dabbles in darker High Fantasy or Isekai stories. I avidly enjoy books, shows, and even game scenes that are powerful enough to bring out emotion.
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Seen your comments On a good number of chapters in the past 200 or so doing good work. but it seems Rinoz simply doesn’t read chapter comments or you probably would have gotten a response at some point. Mild inconsistencies and typos are a shame but aslong as they get rectified at some point I’m good with it. had a vampire system story not ever fix ANY inconsistencies and I had to drop it simply because they got too wild. hope it doesn’t come to that with this grand novel.
[What do you think Crinis? Would I float?] [….What, Master?] [Uh, what do you think about the Kaarmodo, haha?]
Would the bugs have their own status and levels since they are individual creatures that just happen to live within him? Like how queen ants make More ants that each have their own status and level and suc….
Probably what the tree ancient does to the apolypse strata mana, as shown with that toxic frog During the wave defens…
The toxic frog came from the strata directly below demon strata- The Fourth. the fantastic layer is 5th strata, apolypse layer is 4th.
Ayy, finally corrected the omen chomp Typos
Since its an undead couldnt you make a mana Core for him to use water magic? Then he can just sap nutrients wherever he lands for the mushrooms using the water Mana to soak the dry ground temporarily, being his mana capacity replenishes quickly enough.
Im sure a skeleton bird could fly, If a skeleton man could walk. Thr innate movement skill that maintains the shape and mobility of a humanoid skeleton would surely have a fish and bird and beast version. isnt the lizardman skeleton’s extra limb- the tail- proof of this logic?
So that is how you make a golem after all
I feel like at some point vampire Lineages wil be borne with the blood clots as the initiators
Loask also shares the same first letter as Loser~!
Right, but that's looking at his merits the way a Human would look at them. Ant hierarchy structure and way of natural thinking is fundamentally different. These merits would give him a good perception, but would ultimately only be seen as a hard-working ant, like the rest of them. That's the natural first thought to all of the colony members toward eachother's achievements. Merits wouldn't get you on equal grounds to the head ant queen in an ant colony. Not by themself, that is. That's where the persuasive gland's key role is, it turns those 'merits' in the eyes of ants into grand achievements equivalent to something completely out of the ordinary for their society, a non-queen leader's efforts.
When fex was first introduced to the vr capsule, he said he wished they had something like them in the vampire world to train in... yet another inconsistency
They met at school when he wasteaching, silly
Existential depression really do be hitting immortals differently