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shinonwater12dCommentéSooo observant (*with sarcasm)
He Juan watched the interaction between them with a grin that resembled a Cheshire cat. He had no idea when it started, but Ye Qiu seemed to harbor a tiny crush on Marius, this refined and princely figure who was always there to teach her how to control her pheromones. It was so damn obvious that only a blind would miss it.- shinonwater14dCommenté
I don't understand why they couldn't just take the urgent initiative to retrieve the cctv
Chen Youzhi nodded and turned away. - shinonwater14dCommenté
Hmm, I really don't think an ophthalmologist is the right doctor for dyslexia. Should be neuro psychologist and speech language pathologists.
Mu Yuze snuck a hesitant glance at He Juan as though asking permission, sending a spark of joy blooming across He Juan's heart. Just look at how endearing this boy was! Unable to resist a smile, he patted Mu Yuze's head and told him, "Go. Just follow Doctor Zhang's instructions and you will be fine. He is the most renowned ophthalmologist in this hospital. I'm sure you will be in good hands." - shinonwater15dCommenté
Very thin walls, MY should've heard HJ on the phone as well
Alas, not even a few minutes later, He Juan's ears twitched as he heard the unmistakable sound of blanket rustling, followed by a sigh. Mu Yuze was still not asleep yet. Why? Was it because he was still not used to living in this place or… - shinonwater16dCommenté
What kind of logic is that, these guys are detectives/ police?
Li Zhi frowned. The culprit behind Wu Liang's death was his son, Wu Yuan. If what Captain Rong suspected was true, that Wu Liang was indeed silenced in order to prevent him from leaking any important information, then wouldn't that mean that the executor was none other than his son – Wu Yuan? - shinonwater16dCommenté
I've noticed this C country will let pedophiles and their acts get a slap on the wrist (based on other webnovels from this country) and this child will get the full law thrown at him. I don't think this country has juvenile court. Everything seems to be up to a judge (most of the time is bribed).
Many people might think it was unfair, but law had always been cold-blooded. A human life had been lost and regardless of the solid reason behind the act, it was still considered an unpardonable violation of law. The most they could do was to provide evidence of the domestic violence and appeal to the judge that it was self-defense on the poor culprit's part. - shinonwater17dCommenté
Leniency?! For all the atrocities committed, I don't think so
Under the interrogation team's joint effort, Li Mingzhao finally broke down and recounted the event which transpired that year. At least if he spoke the truth, then he would be able to beg leniency for his sentence later on. - shinonwater17dCommenté
Pedophile!
The crime on Li Mingzhao's head gradually increased. Even if his ancestors were to climb out from their graves right now, they still would not be able to wash him clean. The evidence against him was solid and irrefutable, and it was expected that he would spend the rest of his life behind the prison bars. - shinonwater17dCommenté
Yuck 😞
The one sitting in front of Li Zhi was included in the second category, named Qin Zhen. He was a thirty six years old Beta who had been working in Phoenix Ablaze for nearly eight years. Toward the unique trait of Li Mingzhao who preferred to bring in minors, he knew quite well compared to others because he had been tasked to clean the aftermath a few times before. - shinonwater17dCommenté
Plot God
"...You don't really like him, do you?" - shinonwater17dCommenté
Ask "Why Plot God, is this a book? Am I in a book or game"?
So, inhaling and exhaling a sharp breath, Chunhee asked, "Why are you helping me?" - shinonwater17dCommenté
Ugh, the worst, to take your life because of someone else's lack of feelings for you. Means Chunhee didn't value or love himself enough, if at all.
In every life, the same heart beat for the same person. Every time, "Chunhee" experienced the same thorny path, pain, and miserable death. And for the sixth Chunhee, most especially, he was betrayed and he even took his life because of that pain. - shinonwater17dCommenté
Maybe this book will offer a different deserving partner as I read (would be refreshing), but I get the gist that we're stuck with this guy for Chunhee. And by gist I mean, the troupe where he hits his head and changes personality or some memory thing.
"Then, should we just break it off? Why don't we just break off this engagement so we can both save ourselves from this ridiculous setup? Don't you even know what will happen to me in the future?" Chunhee wanted to ask back. He really did but for some reason, all of it got stuck in his mouth. The moment Yujin uttered such heartless words, Chunhee felt his own heart was being ripped into pieces and his mind went blank. He couldn't even utter any word or move one bit. He just knew, deep down inside, he was breaking and it seemed to be an endless one. - shinonwater17dCommenté
The word is 'expelled', not spelled.
"S-Spelled…?" Chunhee's eyes went wide and his face paled. Did Yujin really just say Chunhee would get spelled just because – just because of a spilled juice?! Heck, that was an accident! And him not helping that student from back then was only for Yujin to see his ugly side and hate him! Chunhee froze. Suddenly, a huge light bulb popped out on top of his head. - shinonwater19dCommentéCh 460 Chapter 453. Down The Hill
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Body dysmorphia?
"I am not like any other Omega." Mu Yuze suddenly said, his tone subdued. "I am rough and strong. I don't smile. I don't like to groom myself, my pheromones are not sweet and mild and most importantly… I am not pretty." - shinonwater22dCommenté
"Like a newborn " needs less of a description that brings up a pure image of a newborn with a man's hands doing the undressing
The man's skillful hands did a great job as they managed to strip the girl in no time. The girl was like a newborn with no cloth covering her body, and she squirmed uncomfortably under the man's hungry gaze. - shinonwater22dCommenté
Why is Mr (mister for male address) Chen a woman?
The young woman smiled slightly, elegantly standing up, her hands holding the baby stroller, "I was just passing by this time, spending the holiday walking around with my baby, enjoying some parent-child happiness. I'll officially visit when my holiday is over, and we can discuss cooperation then." - shinonwater22dCommenté
Confusing description, too short, needs to be described a little further .
A set of purple-black armor, like crystalline gems crafted into a ferocious metal form, slowly emerged from the darkness. - shinonwater28dCommenté
'Her', not 'his'.
His parents, mere common factory workers, and his unremarkable brother, were also objects of her impatience.