I like soft spoken people :D
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Author, I heard about what happened in Webnovel from YouTube. Is that why you stopped writing ? :(
Bruh the nation is desperate and struggling , but that’s all you care abt? Haven’t you had enough money already?
The story is really ii good, but I dont see a lot of character development of both the main and side characters. And that’s kind of a waste of potential. This is just my opinion, and the kinds of novels I usually like to read, so it’s up to you, ig. Perhaps, if you want to go in this direction, giving different characters’ pov and having some fluffs would help.
No,? I think the story is flowing nicely. And the world structure is solid good. You did a great job 👍🏻
Yes, it’s good to see inspirational mc’s. I learned a lot
That’s a huge buff tho, (in gaming terms)
Really like their relationship rn
Your novel is really good! I like reading it. It’s now my daily novel which I read often. Thanks for writing !