The_Ram_TS

Esto es tan estupido....

The truth is that this story lacks a lot. Let's start with his powers, he's basically an op monster, which wouldn't be a problem if it weren't for the fact that the story focuses more on him receiving power, and hardly even uses them. The writing and narration leave much to be desired. It is mostly a dump of information where it says what he does, while the dialogues are scarce and too simple, as if the characters had no life, they were just AI.

Pretty good, actually. I admit I didn't have faith in it because of the first few chapters, since I thought it would be an Adams world where the protagonist wouldn't interact with the characters in that world, But in the end I was wrong, before the protagonist met the characters of Wednesday, there was a rather interesting introduction, not at all boring, well written and not long I give this fic a 10/10

Too boring, too rambling, too slow, too problematic. There is no balance in this story, it just shows a cheap drama that is basically a protagonist complaining. Good grammar, bad narrative. The first chapter is interesting, then there's a bit of drama, and then some more, and then the cheap drama never ends.

They can't, they are programmed to do the same shit

Está horrible, gracias!

I recommend only reading the first chapter, from there on everything goes downhill. It's that kind of fic where things happen without a valid or coherent reason. There is thought from the main characters

This fic dropped in quality so fast....

Yes, sir. YES, SIRRR!!!!

Bad story, very boring.It's a slow-paced story, the problem is that it's not designed to be entertaining. The author relies more on philosophical drama. The dialogues are decent at best. Maybe semi-decent sentences wouldn't be a problem, if it weren't for the fact that it's a slow-paced story.