Smiitaa

Interesting, the story is really engaging and special .. and the writing as well, I enjoyed reading the first two chapters, we wish u all the best✨

Interesting! Thanks for ur hard work and thanks for allowing reading this wonderful piece! I like ur way of describing such things, I feel like I live the scene with all my being, and that's very attractive! I give y 5✨

Nice written, interesting story, I like the way u describe with and I think it's beautiful, thank u for ur hard work, and good luck. I give u 5.

Adorable!

Nice shot

I see, thank you, I really appreciate that ✨✨

thank youu✨✨

القصة جيدة، و الأحداث مشوقة، لكن المرجوا مراجعة الأخطاء الإملائية و النحوية .. منها ليبدو العمل أكثر جمالية و ايضا ليجذب انتباه القراء . بالتوفيق🌼

جميل بشكل ما✨ كملاحظة، راجعي الأخطاء الإملائية قبل النشر

I recently had the opportunity to delve into your work, and I commend your effort in creating a captivating narrative. However, I would like to offer a constructive review that highlights the need for further refinement and increased engagement within the story. While your writing style is commendable, there is room for improvement in terms of making the work more attractive and heightening the suspense that your piece demands. Just sharing my opinion and for sure your work is adorable, just keep going.