Khan00

Thanks for the chapter looking forward to the next

You didn’t do bad at all truthfully but maybe try and go through the thoughts and what they would say a little more like putting yourself in each of their shoes and writing what they might think and say from their and if you already are just keep up the good work and develop your writing slowly over the span of this story and any others in the future

Thank you for the chapter and if he hasn’t already found good people to help I’d be happy to

Please save them

Thanks for the chapter but with everything that has happened after every police shooting they are sent home till an investigation has been completed

Thank you for the chapters looking forward to catching up and seeing how things go

Great novel with a lot of potential if it gets picked back up

Thank you for the chapter looking forward to the next

Alton Carver - I feel like it would be a good fit since this way it could be believable and a little hard for him to prove since a lot of his information would be hidden by the four of owls

Hey yall you should definitely give this one a try pace isn’t crazy like a lot of others which can be annoying since they aren’t fleshed out and it’s good to see an author that is willing to put his character threw hell and not have them over powers as an 8 year old