SoggyBottomBoi

honestly i just picture Hawk as a Moltres completely covered in blue flames

Are you back fr? I was disappointed when you stopped posting forever ago, but I'm glad you're back if you're here to finish the book! I liked your writing style and sincerely hope you continue

why is the whole chapter mashed into one paragraph

did this book get dropped or is it finished? cause I'm around chapter 400 and I don't want to get to this point and be left hanging

me too kid, me too

Honestly, it'd be a great read if it weren't for the MC and various plot holes. Why have a story based around the whole goes back in time thing if he's gonna be surprised over every little thing that he should honestly know. With how big the background is of his clan, as a player he should've known about them. I don't understand why he is always acting surprised over every little thing, and this doesn't only pertain to just the MC. It feels like everyone is on some sort of spectrum because it seems like no one has any real idea of the larger world around them. And the imperial production guild. How in the world does the council not have any idea what their initial meeting is about when they bring him in?? They should have been briefed the day before that their 4 pillars candidate was brought to the city. TL/DR MC is an idiot, consistently making poor choices that SOMEHOW go right for him and everyone around him is just about in the same boat IQ wise

yeah, it's pretty stupid. I don't understand a lot of his thought processes. he makes the stupidest choices and actions almost constantly.

I've got high hopes that this will rival The Legendary Mechanic.

every time I see this, all I can picture is the Den Den Mushi from one piece

exactly what popped up in my mind when I saw Papi