HolyQuakaMoly

Lone wolf and assassin. Would be cooler.

Yes... But I like it 👍.

No usually this ends up as cringe. I agree with the first comment.

I would personally like it if you could make Sayo the protagonist. She dies off too early and it’d be interesting to see her alive in the anime rather than dead. You could develop more on her character. Perks: She has good combat abilities and is good with the bow. She’s also close with the protagonist in Akame Ga Kill.

I couldn’t hold it either.

Noice 👍😩👏🔝👌💋 and good. Okay time for a real review. A lot of filler chapters sure but it makes sense later on. I think the gradual romance was PERFECT. It went along smoothly and personally I like slow-burns the best. And the action was amazing too! The other character developments were good too. I personally liked the growth development of Momo. The anime doesn’t do her quirk or real power justice. I loooooove all your other fanfics and hope you continue on writing!

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If you have a problem with what the author is writing then buzz off. I don’t think there’s another person who puts that much effort into fan fictions. If you don’t like you can go. Hope the point got through.

For a... what exactly?

Lol, I get you.