PickleMe
a very dreamy lazy nugget, with social anxiety as a cherry top.
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I don't usually review fics but this one seemed promising at the start only to go downhill from there ( no I am not talking about whatever 1 chapter ntr happened, the author already said it would) the writing style is good, the world building isn't bad either but the MC and the interactions are straight up horrible. outside of the MC being the typical the talented handsome Gary tsu who's lust is only overshadowed by lack of defining positive character treats. supposedly he is a kind and great man( author's words not mine) but in reality is a (semi) arrogant selfish hypocritical retard with the self control of a bulldog. he said he doesn't view his mom that way and took 1 chapter exactly to flip, same thing done to the gyaru(whatever her name is) and Komi. I don't fault a guy for being a horn dog but I absolutely blame the author for trying to slip the nice guy who just wants the happiness of others on it. the whole premise of the story is nice until you realise that the author's effect on the story is either perv on girls, make jokes/references and agree with the protag. my assessment that this Is a poorly concealed wish fulfillment SI that fluncuate depending on how horny the author is.
he didn't need to?his essence of blank should cover that and let him learn it...
the day people understand that what is practiced in the middle east is Polygyny is a good day, even though it is honestly a lot less common in our times
I would say let he who is most generous cast the first stone but yours is nice as well, have at thee my pebbles.
shisui
while I feel partially offended I can't seem to understand the significance of auriel here
confidently saying the ocean touches itself isn't the gotcha moment you think it is lil bro, also this was kinda satire anyway.
honestly, this wasn't beyond my expectations for the last 5 or so chapters, I haven't been able to enjoy this fic as much as I used to.maybe it's due to the fact that it dove into elements that are really known to this measly scrub level MCU enjoyer like limbo and suchmaybe due to the fact that contrasting with the great wisdom hector usually preaches, his development seems particularly forced.or maybe it's just the fact that what drew me into this novel ( aka gacha) has occured on 3? occasions in 62 chapters and of the real time of a full year.the harem, the turns around the romance, the grim side that is displayed in various instances, I can't really bother with any of them to be fair. I will adopt a wait and see approach for now, hopefully (for me) the next chapters would be something I like.
I have been reading this novel before it was added here.And in my humble opinion, it is THE BEST against the gods fanfic there is.Everything about it (after the first few chapters to some people) is written perfectly.It has the exact correct amount of power leveling and character development, along with great side characters that all feel distinct from each other.I really hope to see this finish to the gem it could be.
ironically the reason I am dissatisfied the most isn't the fact that it's harem or that he gets the women that scumche already got. the female leads are hallow, the relationships they have is shallow, the only person who even got a barely decent amount of screen time with the MC is jasmine. I don't fault you for being a smut writer or for wanting all of them to get together. but it feels so rushed and the MC is so desperate for sex it's honestly pathetic. I certainly believe you can do better than this even though you might not want to, and you are in the end entitled to your own way of writing just as I am entitled to comment on it
the hypocrisy is unreal...
started high and went down low. I don't have a problem with harems nor the MC wanting one the start of this novel gave the impression of a calm collected person that actually values relationships to an extent. I don't know if it's because it's meatball novel or just poor character designs and plot building but the MC at the moment is just scumche with knowledge of the novel and a "cheat". 90 chapters in and not one single major plot change, I would give it a full 1 star but it would be unfair to the good start it had.
someone check the authors hard drive
bro is making eidolon with Tate mentality
a very rare exceptions maybe about 1 in a thousand grandma's or something
Excluding child mortality, the average life expectancy during the 12th–19th centuries was approximately 55 years
if we gotta assume the normal stupidity of the characters. Luffy loses for meat. Naruto loses for ramen. only bleach is the truly strong one left.