Roran14

Easily one of the best works I have read here, the plot is consistently keeping on my toes! I would love to see this go far!

As much as I liked the initial premise of the story, the way that the author seemed to put exponentially less effort into writing complete words chapter by chapter, I felt forced to give up reading by chapter 15 . I have read other works by this author as well and I was not disappointed with those at all, however this one is no good from a literate reader perspective .

greatly enjoyed reading this to completion. Seemed a little rushed to the end, but curious to see if the author will continue like he said

got paid when he went back to the merc guild

I'm truly enjoying the novel so far! The only qualms I have is 1: strange arcs kinda just thrown in at random. 2: a few chapters are duplicated/in the wrong order 3: the most recent 35 chapters are all privilege (the most I've ever seen on any novel was 20 before this). I feel like if these are resolved/edited the story would flow smoother and be more enjoyable than it already is!

Kinda lazy writing, author doesn't finish words on a consistent basis. Started off great, but steadily became lazy ex: "notif" instead of "notifications" or when listing quests just cutting off in the middle of the quest title without typing the rest of the word. It's okay if it doesn't happen every paragraph, but come on dude.