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I just want to say that this story is absolutely amazing and I couldn't be happier with the writing style. The author is very genuine in character development and at no point was the story boring or uninteresting
if you keep reading, he doesn't necessarily stay human
There are way too many mistakes in the writing quality and the story is trying too hard to seem like a VR but then completely switches at a random point to PC. The entire story makes no sense, it is supposed to be the year 2090 with a VR game but instantly slipped further back in time closer really to our current time period being on PC. Overall it's just a try hard story with very bad writing that makes no sense at all