I write currently a novel. You know like everyone else. Maybe you could give it a try. I mean only if anyone is reading this. XP
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The fight scene was good, even if his decision to not hurt them was, concerningly, only motivated by the inconvenience it would cause. I still feel like this moment should have come later.
That seems like quite a tame answer after he demolished a gang. 😂
He has a very short temper that's not reflected in his usually calculating personality.
This feels like a confrontation that should happen after the main character found all the information needed to discern who this is. But that didn't happen, now there's not even a point in his friend even getting any of that information instead, it made no difference to any of this...
Remarks how weak his body is and immediately starts a fight.
Is that a personal insult? 😂
Conspiracy theorists clenching their fists victoriously.
If he had to make the investigation himself, he wouldn't know who they were yet. That could have added some mystery.
You don't really have to announce that observation directly, it was already quite well indicated by her behaviour.
That's a very sensible observation.