Renegade_Gamer
I'm a single father and a workaholic. I loved to write back in my younger years and never had a chance to write while raising my kids. But now with some free time, I do my creative writing.
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Renegade_Gamer2 years agoRépondu à SaltzmasterTo Lance, it does. Lol
- Renegade_Gamer4 years agoPosté
This is was a really good read. I started to feel for the MC and her plight, and although the story was really short, I quite enjoyed the story. Some minor grammatical errors, but they were few and far between. Very good.
- Renegade_Gamer4 years agoRépondu à Cody_Bowen
Thank you very much for the amazing review. I like to hear about how people like my book and their thoughts. And I'm doing this all on my own and doing my own editing, so if you or anyone finds an error, please, feel free to comment and ill will correct it. Thanks again for the review.
- Renegade_Gamer4 years agoRépondu à linFan
I was two points off on both stats. My original idea was to have the strength and dexterity go up by either 2 or 3 each level. I scrapped that cause it would have made things much harder to keep track. Thank you for showing this to me, I will fix it. The future chapters will have corrected stats though. I did write this chapter, and up to chapter 20 inside a couple days. And i wasn't writing down everything at first.
- Renegade_Gamer4 years agoCommenté
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
- Renegade_Gamer4 years agoCommenté
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
- Renegade_Gamer4 years agoCommenté
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
- Renegade_Gamer4 years agoCommenté
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
- Renegade_Gamer4 years agoCommenté
I'm really enjoying this book. Keep the chapter coming.
