Barnacleboy

I’m not one to complain much about a fanfiction let alone a translation, but seriously, you gotta stick with the English names. You literally translating it to English. Your doing a great job at everything else but names are killin me.

It literally say 2-10 people is a harem

Has he already released the new Pokemon games?

Who’s head?

Thx for the chap

Love the plot twist. Thanks for the chapters

The writing quality, update stability, and character design are all pretty good. The only thing I have to comment about is the world. I really have no idea what it’s like so far. The only info I have is that there are sects, a protagonist, and there was a spar on a mountain that created a sword lotus. The concept of the story is great though. And I might be wrong but the fact that he sees things pop up in comic format as information is interesting. At least, that’s what I imagine while reading it. As of 27 chapters in I definitely recomend.

Now this is just false man. A light kick is just a kick with less force put into it. Why would you change your form?

I mean… For a dude obsessed with martial arts that’s one bitter pill. Tbh I’m just gunna pretend that it’s just the author not knowing any martial arts. You don’t need formal training to understand Jujitsu or Grappling. It’s all about knowing different locks per situation and having good physical fitness. While boxing really comes down to talent, hard work, and a good coach. Not to mention, this was literally the only thing going for him. It’s a fantasy novel, you already clarified that the mc is talentless. You would assume after studying theoretical martial arts he would know some actual techniques (not saying he would be proficient but even a layman like me could name most moves used in the UFC). But to suddenly read about how he does some physics in the matter of seconds with no measurements and magically he can balance and dodge slimes is a hard pill to swallow. And at this point I’m starting to feel like the story is gunna be about characters muttering things like “heavenly tiger claw” or “divine cloud step”. Then a clash and some description about how powerful the shockwave was. I know it’s jumping the gun a bit, but seriously, where can I find a novel with some real martial art representation? I’ve legit read dozens of novels about martial arts, and not a single one represents earth martial arts.

True. A lotta games now would be totally unacceptable then though. Imagine binding of Isaac being released when people still thought games made you a serial killer