Dawn_Morgan

the book is holding my interest. can't wait for more

needs a little editing in a few places. Chapter 5 should be the state of the art tub, not the state of the heart tub. just 1 of the things, but overall, it's a good read. some of the words are messed up like it was talk to text ( heart , art) ( howebit, how about it)

the story is well thought out and written. will read it again.

yu

you have bean paste twice she must need a lot of it.[img=recommend]

thank you for writing a good story

in the first paragraph, is it supposed to be a "big fish in a small pond" or a " big finish in a small pond" that was written ????

pretty good read so far . a few spelling hiccups but still easy to read

next 2 chapters are swapped double check before reading them

please help 93 should be 94 and 94 should be 93 almost got very confused when reading them