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your idea is extremely good but you need to see your grammar: like your tense, spelling and appropriate word choice, etc You can use "Grammarly" to improve writing quality. Then character development needs to be done.... have him interact with people more and progress the plot...you can write the training part in special occasions like before important fight, progress to next level,gaining something important,etc and you have a bad habit of writing in present tense, please use other tenses also. bye, hope you don't drop this
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