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cringy and stupid now. He realized this guy is a crazy and obsessed creep, more so than in original but still believes his word that he will stay away.

mc is a powerful and can have everything he wants. He has the potential to be one of the strongest in world but instead he let's himself get beat up and hated on to help the hero. Truly pathetic mc.

oh yes because I can easily visual that

Brooo lololol no wonder you're trying so hard to defend. Checked out ur profile, this is your husband's fanfic. No wonder.

I like a good well thought out story with a evil or good mc(Magical Journey is a great example). But the author literally said the mc felt butterflies thinking that he couldn't help good people who are going face tradegy.That whole paragraph is cheesy af. You have to at least agree with that.

I don't need a author to forced feed me info on how good a Samaritan the mc is. They just have to find a good in-between.

There's been a trend of this and it's annoying. Authors blatantly making sure everyone knows the mc is righteous. It's not needed.

????? So why have a past life at all. There no point for reincarnation. Just make a regular oc.

What's the point of the whole reincarnation thing without memories. There is no contribution to the plot. He can't remember events or know impeding threats. The story sounds good and I'll still be giving it a read. I hope it will exceed expectations.