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Shira_ori

Shira_ori

Lv14

Just a depressed weeb.

2020-05-13 JointGlobal
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori15h
    Répondu à Im_HIM996

    You need to lower your standards if you think she’s mid

    This will give me one of the most beautiful faces in the world, in my opinion, accompanied by a body that matches and that I find perfect!
    The Sexy Futa Player
    Fantaisie · Ero_Hacker
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori21h
    Répondu à ObserverFaker

    Don’t bother, I spent ages going back and forth with this author about this ability and how it either should have done nothing or made him lvl 100 not 110 but the author said that apparently the ability can add more than +10 which wasn’t in the abilities description in chapter nine which I asked to author to update

    He was currently level 90, however, his displayed level was now 110 since Cervantez hit level 100 yesterday.
    Terra Nova Online : Rise Of The Strongest Player
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori1d
    Commenté

    The only reason diamonds are so expensive is because of artificial demand, jewelers make it seem like diamonds are rare so they can raise prices but diamonds can literally be made in labs now and it’s not even slow plus with lab made diamonds you can have whatever colour you want.

    [Yes but the normal diamonds, uncut, will barely give you more than 0.5 Diamonds in the system. The rarer the diamond, the better its value.]
    Reality Bender System, Marvel
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori2d
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    Tianshui*

    "I personally killed Huo Yuhao. You dare to challenge the dignity of my Haotian Sect. Today, you shall all stay here!"
    Douluo: Helping my ancestors ascend to godhood
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
    Répondu à Raj_Shah_7152

    I am no longer going to argue with you but just so you know case one is the exact same issue as the example I showed in the screenshot. You clearly can’t be bothered to at least update the description of the ability to make it work how you want it to (in chapter nine) so I’ll leave you to it and spend my money elsewhere.

    Terra Nova Online : Rise Of The Strongest Player
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
    Répondu à Raj_Shah_7152

    Yes but in this particular instance the one that I specifically mentioned and showed in the screenshot, the mc was 20 levels lower than cervantez and cervantez was not the second ranked player but the first. Also if you’re ability works like that then do in fact have to change the description In chapter nine. I feel it is you who is not understanding me.

    Terra Nova Online : Rise Of The Strongest Player
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
    Répondu à Raj_Shah_7152

    You said that if his level is higher than the second ranked it would display his true level but in this example the second ranked player was the mc +10 would have made the mc level 100 it wouldn’t have made him level 110 because Cervantez was not the second ranked player he was first ranked.

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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
    Répondu à Raj_Shah_7152

    It is still a wrong use of the ability

    Terra Nova Online : Rise Of The Strongest Player
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
    Répondu à Raj_Shah_7152

    This is you replying to me catching you using the ability wrong telling me that I misunderstood even though now you’re telling that I’m wrong even though you apparently think you’re using the ability as you wrote it in chapter nine (which you aren’t in this example, i think you did this to force the plot and hoped that no-one would catch on)

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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
    Répondu à Raj_Shah_7152

    This image is me catching you using the ability wrong. Cervantez at this point in time was the first ranked player so his ability making him 10 levels higher than Cervantez makes no sense.

    Terra Nova Online : Rise Of The Strongest Player
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
    Répondu à Raj_Shah_7152

    I’ll separate my reply into three pieces as I can only put one image per reply, this image is a deleted reply.

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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
    Répondu à Raj_Shah_7152

    You deleted whatever reply you left before so as far as I know you just realised I was right and decided you didn’t want to engage in a losing argument anymore, if you really want your level ability to work the way you’ve made it then you need to change the description of it in chapter nine, also I’m not the only person finding and pointing out mistakes (that you aren’t editing) and plot holes.

    Terra Nova Online : Rise Of The Strongest Player
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
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    (Chapter 223) Overall it’s an ok read just full of plot holes written by an author who consistently forgets what they wrote in the past so that they can force the plot forward or create unnecessary drama, the mc seems to have not grown at all going from acting calm and collected to an irrational teenager having a temper tantrum, I gave it a good try but in the end just got fed up and would rather not continue to spend my money on this.

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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
    Commenté

    Why doesn’t he see if he can use mp to change his Id

    "Leo Skyshard, really? Might as well have named myself 'Please Rob Me DAILY' What's next? A gaming ID named Leo Skyshard is the boss?" Leo wondered, as he felt extremely dumb about even typing in his name on the keyboard.
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
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    Why didn’t you just do Jin mu? He’s already told his brother that his id is Jin mu you’re just making more unnecessary problems author.

    [ System Notification - Congratulations Player 'Leo Skyshard', your second ID name has been successfully registered. Please enjoy gaming with your new identity~ ]
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
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    What a stupid excuse

    "Fine, if you must, then after entering first for a few minutes, I was trying to change into my usual clothes, however, these damn golden buttons were too hard to open.
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
    Répondu à ShiveRr

    Just another plot hole for the ever growing pile

    With trembling hands, the maid opened the lock to Leo's door, as Dom and the Captain headed into the room.
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
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    Branded as a rebel and a Messiah of the poor, Leo was gaining unprecedented popularity as the commoners became idolizing him and what he stood for.
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
    Répondu à Raj_Shah_7152

    Why don’t you edit it then

    "My Lord, you must listen to our plea. The Boss is not a morally upright citizen. He's a barbaric monster who has brutally injured one of the Knight and Mage Academy's brightest prospects while also going on to kill another candidate in the round of 32.
    Terra Nova Online : Rise Of The Strongest Player
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori4d
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    That’s got to be a disqualification

    Ten daggers that would have otherwise been planted into Tor's backframe, missed their marks because of the crowd warning as Tor rolled around in the mud below to try to regain his footing.
    Terra Nova Online : Rise Of The Strongest Player
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