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LichKing6mthCommenté*pressing
I turned the handle slowly while pissing my ear against it but found it to be completely silent.- LichKing11mthCommenté
It has not become the V6 yet, ut is currently the V5 until after the Chimera Ant Arc
Ce livre a été supprimé. - LichKing1yrRépondu à WulfricTheodore
I understand, I just like this story very much and I think that if the grammar was a little better, it would be amazing.
Just as there was no doubt the Targaryens were an ancient family dating back to the period of Old Valyria or like the dark skin Valariyons, there was no doubt about the tragedy that was the life of every Targaryen. It could even be argued that they never truly escaped the deadly curse that once fell upon their mighty Homeland for all they had ever done was just delay their inevitable doom by extending their miserable existence despite having dragons, being Dragonriders, and even rulers, they underwent countless suffering still. No matter whether they were fathers, daughters, mothers, or sons, they all died pathetically leaving an ever-crumbling legacy. - LichKing1yrCommenté
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Just as there was no doubt the Targaryens were an ancient family dating back to the period of Old Valyria or like the dark skin Valariyons, there was no doubt about the tragedy that was the life of every Targaryen. It could even be argued that they never truly escaped the deadly curse that once fell upon their mighty Homeland for all they had ever done was just delay their inevitable doom by extending their miserable existence despite having dragons, being Dragonriders, and even rulers, they underwent countless suffering still. No matter whether they were fathers, daughters, mothers, or sons, they all died pathetically leaving an ever-crumbling legacy. - LichKing1yrRépondu à Zhorvak
This flag looks very plain, maybe something with more detail to it?
House sigil/banner: - LichKing1yrPosté
I think that this is a very good start to a story and that this story can receive regular updates; it will be one of the top stories in Marvel fanfiction. I would suggest also fleshing out the main characters more in the upcoming chapters so that you have more ground to stand on by building relationships between them. Overall, I think this story has great potential, and I can't wait to continue reading it!
- LichKing1yrPosté
Amazing! Simply amazing! The story is really well thought out and the challenged that the MC goes through and overcomes are amazing. The only negative thing that I would have to say was the ending, it was a little lackluster and wasn't really setup. If there were hints about what was going to happen in the end, then I would have been alright with it, but beggars can't be choosers.
- LichKing1yrRépondu à MM_InferyesCh 6 Gratitude
- LichKing1yrRépondu à _oinkchan
It technically is not a crown but a circlet. It was only worn during times of war and conquest, other than by Aegon I, Aenys, and Maegor.
His son was born... wearing Aegon's Iron Crown. In the background, the sound of thundering hooves, splintering shields, and swords as the bells of the Septal rang and all the dragons roared as one. - LichKing1yrCommenté
Aegon the Conquerer's crown was made of Valyrian Steel, set with big square-cut rubies.
His son was born... wearing Aegon's Iron Crown. In the background, the sound of thundering hooves, splintering shields, and swords as the bells of the Septal rang and all the dragons roared as one. - LichKing1yrCommenté
Whoa, Whoa, Whoa! Is he saying that he orchestrated the death of Aemma Arryn, Baelon and Rheynra's mother, who died while giving birth to Baelon?
From the corner of his eyes, he glanced at Viserys and almost felt like barfing. The fool was smiling happily as if the Queen he had taken from him had magically revived. - LichKing1yrPosté
Very interesting concept. The grammar and writing quality are very good. The only potential issue that I see with the character is that he could get very strong very fast, and then it would not feel worth it. Maybe remove some of his powers or change them to suit his Valyrian heritage? Please implement challenges and obstacles for our MC to face that naturally flow with the story and further the plot. I just wish you would post longer chapters more frequently because this is a great story with great potential!
- LichKing3yrCommentéCh 120 A Whiff (120)
- LichKing3yrRépondu à Blanf
wrong https://***.youtube.com/watch?v=g1QONg2b2JQ
Damian who saw the boar stop fidgiting smirked and said, "No matter how durable you get-" and thrusted his spike of a hand in the boar's neck, killing it instantly. "You cannot be harder than a diamond." and took his hand out of the boar's neck and shook it once to get rid of the blood and changed his hand back to normal. - LichKing3yrCommentéCh 85 Update