Tropical_GameZ

He'll never let him live it down.

Not the best name to have in modern times 😅

Grammar, spelling, and writing quality are perfect but the story, character, and world background are on the low side of the spectrum, your story seems fast-paced lacking depths into the world around you, and the characters within only give a surface view instead of character thoughts or intrigues into it towards or around the new variable called the Mc. He's been speed-running MCU so far in the most casual way that it's predictable at this point, Mc needs to be more interactive and have a fleshed-out personality that somewhat fits his goals, etc. The world has no deeper descriptions other than places of origin, so nah only 3 stars.

your right 👍

I ask myself that every time my wife knows I want some.

If I was going to be a woman anyway I'd do this too, but request it off the bat! Took me to the left field there.😅

Omg, this idea has been in the back of my mind for 13 years now, seeing it being applied here in a novel is pissin me off a tad bit there. 😆

Judging how this fic goes that's a grantee