James_Pouder

well it was OK but then you had to pull in magical abilities and so forth while over powering the mc's summon system that killed my interest in this story.

so he went from looking for his girl to hiding? so far the Mc goes from driven to undecided and cowardly.

wow this was such an entertaining read then it just stopped. well I hope the author will eventually pick it back up.

sorry but with his personality he would have killed her before allowing her to leave with that info.

wow thats just pathetic, and even in such worlds if the house was left to Nathan then Leon really should not have been able to even get in. just had to do something cliche to force the story.

its been an awesome fic so far.

Ultimately it comes down to do you as the author feel there is justification and need for adding more women into the MC's love life? With his domain and skills it does leave room for additional interest as long as Olivia can accept and the dynamic does not shift too far.

Not necessarily just way too unfocused for my personal reading.

hope you heal up and use a 1/8 inch dowel rod to scratch your hand, its small 3nough to fit and strong enough to not break.

well so much for this MC and plot. started out great but this, bye and best of luck.