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The story is a common one on this vast sea of genres. It possesses some good characters and a general good plot to entertain your boring life. The pacing seem to be alright. But the grammar is something that should be worked on regularly. Thankfully there are several tools who can help in this case, but who do I judge on grammar that even I am having big trouble since English is my second language.
Great introduction so far
Expect the next chapter to drop at the end of the week
This is a very nice novel. The plot seems to be heading in a good direction. Character design seems average for this website, and the background is good. A good novel for this website. Very nice cover
Writing quality: needs some improvement in my opinion, but everyone has his starts Stability of updates: It looks alright. Story development: It looks promising. Gotta keep an eye on it. Character design: Kinda looks average to today web novels. World Background: It looks promising. Additional note: Do some small edits here and there at grammatical, and it will look average for Webnovel standards.
I am not a big fan of the Contemporary Romance, but I can honestly say this a great work on this website. I will keep an eye on this novel to see how it will evolve. Still, a work with over 100 chapters, but with no reviews and very small number views it is something you do not see every day. The author must've been stacking chapters and decided to release whenever he wanted. In this case, I would recommend posting the numbers of chapters daily on this website, since it works in the favour of the algorithm. Anyway, the story here it looks promising. Carry on!
I do not think any human would say this whole paragraph while he was tied upside down with blood dripping out.
"A fantastic romance" more like "A common romance"
I like this long chapter. It describes the main characters of this novel. However, some readers from this website will find the long paragraphs to be boring and not interested. For me personally, these long paragraphs will give what a written novel and not a digital novel does, the first person persepective.