Daoist503890

The fanfic feels like a machine translation or AI-generated text for several reasons: Overloaded scenes and dialogues. Everything is stretched out, but nothing really happens. The characters talk for a long time, yet the conversation goes nowhere. The protagonist is a walking humiliation machine. There’s no development, no real conflict—just another "puppet genius" effortlessly crushing everyone. Unrecognizable characters. They act strangely, as if their personalities were randomly swapped with a different set of traits. The world's logic collapses. Hogwarts is just a backdrop, magic works however it’s convenient for the author, but without any real system. Language mistakes. The sentences sound as if they were either run through an auto-translator or generated by an AI without understanding the meaning. If you’re looking for basic fan service where an "overpowered protagonist puts everyone in their place," this is for you. If you want something with a real story, logic, and proper writing style—you’re better off skipping it.