ur personality took a 360.

alright so its pretty interesting as of now. the way its going at least. i love the way its written to be honest. really nice feeling it has. a good read till now and im here to stay. u better keep the updates going.

ELA'S POV?* MAYBE?

ela and aero ship forshadowing?

my story has a twelve year old gal lmao

im a vaelorin.*

nice.

aero? more like ero hehe

change the yellow in previous para to golden as well.

my man has a basement full of kids to warm.

what could go wrong when the third para is about a lil girl selling off wood in little to no clothes,

didnt know i was someone better than mortals.

and here i was thinking its still too soon for his re-emergence.

thanksss soo mcuuhhh. feel free to give me a feedback.

tysmmmm for suchhh an amazing review. i hope you stick aroundd.

thanks so muchhh. i hope you give it a read further.

a savior you are.

totally a chapter that will hook me to a book. loved it.

pretty neat and decent. usually i dont start reading a book this soon and chanced upon this one and rightfully so. hopefully you keep updating it.

thanks sooo muchhhh. glad that you are liking it.