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  • Viduus
    Viduus9d
    Répondu à LightningDomain

    it's sad today's youth is so ignorant. try looking up what a poly of 3 is.. no way its a harem. also my 3 kids may have questions if I am a virgin, just food for thought you sad kid.

    Endless Evolution: Last Star
    Fantaisie · Arlemit
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  • Viduus
    Viduus2mth
    Répondu à Void_Soul78

    I took it his mom died the day of testing and he couldn't focus on the test so he scored pourly

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    Eneas Fate
    Romance · Albinus_istamar
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  • Viduus
    Viduus3mth
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    I hope elly gets a upgrade soon. she is pretty worthless other than cooking.

    Ch 75 The Forbidden Library [2]
    My Assassin Divination is Evil
    Fantaisie · Endratox
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  • Viduus
    Viduus4mth
    Répondu à HomieLv1

    first thing, great story and writing so far. so close range style archer sounds cool on the surface but is totally illogical. example as will be able to block a melee weapon with a bow, that's kinda sad if so. maybe he becomes the greatest player and can dodge/avoid every attack ever, also sounds kinda sad. logical time it would take to draw and aim for a bow, a sword would have already cut him in half. maybe he is that great but that just means every melee player just sucks that much more which is kinda sad. I have lots of questions but was gonna hold off till I see how you wrote it out and hoped it wasn't whack. I like the uniqueness of the story, most mcs in stories use swords or magic so this is a freshness to things.

    Ch 6 Leveling Up (3)
    Supreme Archer: Taking The Game's Weakest Class To The Top
    Bandes dessinées et romans graphiques · HomieLv1
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  • Viduus
    Viduus4mth
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    this close range archer style has me worried.

    Ch 6 Leveling Up (3)
    Supreme Archer: Taking The Game's Weakest Class To The Top
    Bandes dessinées et romans graphiques · HomieLv1
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  • Viduus
    Viduus4mth
    Répondu à manpapper

    the first line of the story has a misspelled word. I noticed atleast 3.

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    My wife is the Vampire Queen.
    Fantaisie · Kirito_K5
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  • Viduus
    Viduus4mth
    Répondu à FailedRead

    yeah the mc is a crayon eater. honestly this chaptor was very hard to read. the system 100% right. he is stupid

    Ch 18 Choose a Zombie to be your Waifu!
    EX-Class: Zombie's Husbando
    Fantaisie · Dummybeing
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  • Viduus
    Viduus4mth
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    I got a question, did you get inspiration from the story" my three wife's are beautiful Vampire's". or did certain things just happen to be similar?

    Ch 28 The Werewolves Are Coming
    The Goddesses In My College Are Actually Demonesses
    Fantaisie · Debauchery_Scholar
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  • Viduus
    Viduus4mth
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    ohh are gonna get a hot werewolf babe Into the action?

    Ch 28 The Werewolves Are Coming
    The Goddesses In My College Are Actually Demonesses
    Fantaisie · Debauchery_Scholar
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  • Viduus
    Viduus4mth
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    Austin won't be a little B forever right? I can only handle so much. If do plz tell me now.

    Ch 13 Annoying Guy
    The Goddesses In My College Are Actually Demonesses
    Fantaisie · Debauchery_Scholar
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  • Viduus
    Viduus4mth
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    the ultimate beta male has arrived

    Ch 25 Changing targets
    Surrounded By Main Characters, I Was the Real Main Character All Along
    Urbain · DXHaseoXD
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  • Viduus
    Viduus4mth
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    ok so the few upcoming chapters will determine if I keep reading or drop. I don't like for the mc to have a mental illness of being stupid. I hope he mans up

    Ch 22 You b*tch (1)
    Surrounded By Main Characters, I Was the Real Main Character All Along
    Urbain · DXHaseoXD
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  • Viduus
    Viduus4mth
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    mc had a emotional addiction

    Ch 12 Friend (5)
    Surrounded By Main Characters, I Was the Real Main Character All Along
    Urbain · DXHaseoXD
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  • Viduus
    Viduus4mth
    Répondu à Vincent_Bossert

    is he stuck as a woman?

    What Do You Mean I'm The Captain Of A Yandere Mercenary Company?
    Romance · Draekai
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  • Viduus
    Viduus5mth
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    honestly so far it is a little confusing. he is comparing himself (who is level 15 I think) to the alpha team who are level 1. as far as stats go. he should be slightly stronger maybe, but he has way more skills. the way it's been written so far skills don't mean much in the way of fighting if your Stats are lacking. so for now he should be on par with alpha class but once they start to level he is basically done for. so unless he gets a better class or some divine thing happens he should go back to being the weakest link out of everyone.

    Ch 41 Rey’s Analysis
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantaisie · Magecrafter
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  • Viduus
    Viduus5mth
    Répondu à Magecrafter

    I think your right, a teenager would have their hormones going all wacky. if he didn't think of any girls, it would be suspicious tbh

    The moment Rey thought about the library, he remembered a face that made him smile a little.
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantaisie · Magecrafter
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  • Viduus
    Viduus5mth
    Répondu à SugarApostle

    idk, but something has to happen. at how the author wrote this. no matter how many skills he has, he will get passed by everyone else with a class. like 100 plus s rank skills are worthless if there is no power behind them. if something doesn't happen for him to get a class or something the story is gonna get ridiculous

    "It pains me to do this, but… we have no other choice." Grandmaster Conrad sighed.
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantaisie · Magecrafter
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  • Viduus
    Viduus5mth
    Répondu à wandiledaniel7

    I was thinking so far maybe it will be kinda like shield hero anime. the dragons are not so bad and were done dirty by humans.

    Rey felt a surge of irritation the more he heard Billy's words.
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantaisie · Magecrafter
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  • Viduus
    Viduus5mth
    Répondu à Divindade_Fantasma

    honestly I would like it if those two became a thing. like the popular girl and the loser getting together, which dont happen in real life. I see your point of finding a local woman though, someone exotic maybe idk.

    Ch 28 There’s Something About Rey
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantaisie · Magecrafter
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  • Viduus
    Viduus5mth
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    I have read to chaptor 140 also the aux chaptor. sadly that is as far as I will read,the writing is awesome, the plot is very nice and all but one character is nicely done. the mc erix is very messy and his whole class/skills/powers are just whacky and honestly don't go together at all. his powers feels very pushed and not in sync at all. rin and the other women seem very thoughtful and flow nicely. last but not least the author turned erix into a rapist, the women are just like totally cool about it also. so that alone would have made me not read the story alone, wish I had known sooner. overall besides those 2 major problems, everything is very topnotch and written very well. I wish the author good luck.

    Supreme Couple In Apocalypse: Undead King & Demonic Queen
    Fantaisie · Eminent_Vellichor
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