Belleish
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I read for fun 😁 I speak Australian English
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Belleish3 years agoCommenté* "remarks"
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* "with whom to form a family" rather than "whom to form a family with"
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* "the thick braid is leaned on my back, reaching my waist and passing it..." isn't quite right either. "the thick braid rests against my back, just passing my waist" would be better
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* "once finished to arrange my..." isn't quite right "once she finished arranging my..." would probs be better
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giving him a complex about his writing
- Belleish3 years agoCommenté
you mean he might get recognised as king
- Belleish3 years agoCommenté
why does this seem like a tracking device