The story began with an action making it very interesting. It's nice reading about a female leading character. The character development is a nice one. I believe given time and more effort on this book, it could be a top ranking one.
Before reading, most times I like to read the synopsis. That determines if I should read the story or not and I must admit, it was attention grabbing. Your use of suspense was good like the Chapter 1 and the others. Keep it up Author.
Truly, I'm loving this book. The first chapter blew my mind. I love how the story started with something like a mild conflict till the time he expressed his desire for her. Good work.
The story is fascinating with a nice plot. I can't get enough of it and I love to continue reading. The plot and the character development are all top notch.