Mockingbird_2179

cool, so he just made a massive tsunami. if an earth quake can make one, blowing apart a sea definitely can

okay, let's see if he stays to this vow.

for 10 hours! he has been in his taxi for 10 hours and does this. I would definitely be asking questions if I had to drive the same person around the city for a day. if he was going to do this, why not take the subway or public busses so he has a higher chance to run into a mutant. Not ride in a car. Who did he think he was going to run into? by God, this Mc is truly a mental case.

Did he just put a gun to the man's head for asking if he was going to continue riding around in his taxi without a destination?

This makes complete sense. After breaking apart his soul into six pieces, dying and transforming into a half living half dead thing. Possesses a professor. dies again. Somehow, he finds his way back to the forest. as a Deformed baby thing still has the power to crush his mind with a thought. It makes complete sense when you think about it.

This was posted 2 minutes after waking up. Now that my brain is firing on all cylinders. the gap between uploads could be all caused by the holidays. We'll see in mid-January.

The story is great. Definitely worth reading. but as time goes on, the chapters get shorter and shorter all the way to too short. it takes 5 to 7 minutes to read a chapter. this was frustrating, but with the translator posting 6 to 8 chapters a day, it was okay. Now, the translator posts 2 or 3 chapters a day or every other day, and it feels like it's still getting shorter. The only other way to make this worse (without dropping) is to have cliffhangers every chapter. This was my first story like this, and it started out amazing. With a translator that edits out all the propaganda. updates coming every day with a whole pile of chapters. it felt like Christmas every day, but because the Translator isn't getting enough money. I think the trend is going to continue down, to never updating again. Small silver lining. This could be winter depression and the translator may return to doing what they've done at the start. Wishful thinking, at least.

Character with a template can't use anything from said template. Makes story altering decisions, then gets depressed because he's not participating in the story because he doesn't want to change the story. Trained from the white room, but doesn't have any training. Kills a bunch of Gangsters, but still acts like a whiny b****. This isn't a story for me.

"Things might change." Like~ Ron not breaking his wand so when Lockhart gets it at the end.He removes the memory from Harry and Ron. Then leaves like he says so Genny dies and Voldemort as a younger kid, resurrects. At least he got rid of Lockhart first.

why not make a dagger that can transform into a long sword. Or just use a dagger if level 7 is so powerful using daggers in the disillusionment charm. Shouldn't he be unstodouble? More so now with demiguise. blood.