Zodiacnotlougher

if an average human in say that, he will only get indifference gazes

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like superman have criptonite as his weakness, This MC has a wekness too, but it is more deadlier, enybody who is jeleous of him wish that every thing he got will gone forever without anyway of returning and voila, this MC will be another pile of dunk

I'm Tunisien , outstanding work so far, keep going Jarri and good luck.

If I was him, i wil say yes, than later kill every one of them but spare one persone in each member of the back, enslaving them in the proses for eternity, the MC can protect their lineage but he didn't say hiw. evil smirk.

This is my first review here so i will try make it short and on the point, This 15 years old MC is with the memory of a 30 years old special force kind of a freak , he can be patient but he can't help becoming a lolicon, what a hypocrite Mc and his cliché reasoning!!! Right?, he gets angry easy dispite of his special force Experience of some brat with his 21 century civilised hiritage of earth, this protagonist is an embrassement to all earthling readers here, shame on you pervert MC.

hhhhh, i really want to go there if its really 200 dollars a day work, holly molly!!!

There are lot's of buts here in this small paragraph lol, you can use however, morover, futhermore and other more istead of but, peace!

Really? Farmers had a dry and meager life!! I disagree but who know better than the farmers themselves.

A bunch of people lost thier humanities long time ago for the sake of profits and he still want to stay with them, the only thing that he will get from them is betrayal and back stabing attitudes, moreover he is the protagonist so he deemed to suffer and his sister is their hostage now after showing them his worth, so it is undestandable if get his sister and flee as far a it get and as soon as posibe, and that Alice, she is a snake man, she started to try to uncover his secrets as soon as he show them his potention contrary to her old behavior of acting nice and all but still kept a distance for him, and i bet that her father send her a telepathic message to interveen when the time right just to get him less resentment. I'm angry of this MC for not seeing this but unstead feeling shy and blushing all of the sudden when around her after this parady is over.