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This fanfic feel like reading a summary.You caan't call this a story at all.There is no plot,no character development and no world exploring at all.Mc came with a plug-in which is a ll purpose powerful can do anything system.I don't mind Op Mc or wish fullfilling story what i do mind is a story which is not a story at all.

The story is too simple.MC needed a reason to justified his greed,ambition or some sort of goal even if he don't at least show MC personality or what kind of person he is.Now MC is nothing more than a senseless butcher who massacred everyone for power which i don't know what he wanna use it for or what he want with it.Just a simple god complex would be more enjoyable than this plain power trip with no goal in sight.

This fanfic really deserve a good review.The plot is unpredictable,outstanding and detailed fight scene,smart MC and most importantly this fanfic is funny asf.I really recommend you to give it a try.

thanks for the fan service.

I think author is confuse.Just because you know something is right doesn't mean you can say it right or think it right.For example calling your father a motherfcker would be more right than calling him papa.You can be the fact guy doesn't mean you can put that fact into people face.Dont get me wrong i like this fic i just dont like this chap feel like youre focusing on the wrong thing i mean does it matter to clarify what your MC personality is when we dont even know his past and in wonderful pokemon world there literally so much known thing to focus and unknown thing to explore and adding complete new elemt is fine too.

MC with op skills and supernatural and superhuman power with his pseudo legendary who will kill the whole continent of pokemon that's what i thought would happen but i am glad it didn't that's mean more than enough for me to enjoy this book.And that's what i mean.

Promising is what i would say.Not too much Op and not too much drama that's plenty good in my book.I would recommend you to give this novel a try.For me i would be booking this novel and wait for around two months to see how much it would update.Thanks for good fanfic.

I can honestly say this is one of the best naruto fanfic that i've ever read until author decided to dropped this fic or simply throwing it away idk.Before sex scene everything is perfectly fcking fine.

Too much theatric ruined this fine story and masterpiece.This fanfic can be call master piece and original story with this much lore,unique characters,good power system,good battle scene and war and kingdom building background story.But alas like i said too much theatric and you will feel like author is bullshting every convo and every scene while ruining this good story with idealistic mentality like holding hands together and fighting evil and the world together and forever if this isn't bullshit idk what is it.What i mean is you're not reading a story you will feel like youre reading a bible.If i need that much theatric in a story book i would rather read the bible.

But wouldn't Dumbledore love the Boku no pico?