well written, it's a totally AU practically a new world but missing most of the potential. His magic ran out quickly, just another psychopath who doesn't even use his powers correctly and becomes obsessed with the impossible and while he pursues it he kills everyone whether they get in his way or not, irrational sadist and hypocrite, how can you love your family so much and destroy them? the rest?.

voldi and grindel at the same time?

It is well written, but I don't think it will be to the liking of many, instead of forging they do rituals and things like that. and the orcs, instead of a race with honor, are cruel rats that wander in the darkness and only want to destroy and kill, well in my case it is not a good read, I suppose some would like it...

certainly, but still the Vex and Rasputin toys 10/10

Not my type of reading, very unnecessarily aggressive towards the world and not very respectful, plus the background is the typical HP story of a guy who only hits everyone, if you like it you can read it perfectly.

MC should have access to Destiny's technology, right? In addition to humanity's super advanced weapons technology, there are also many things that they stole from other races and used to make their technology, for example the Vex, those guys are 100% technology and they already know how to teleport and play with time. Additionally, I could know how to make the specters...

Aoi literally sees your soul then, and her brain was left traumatized repeating what she saw, or her semblance continues to see the soul of devas when she sleeps, as if it activated itself

very good, in terms of magic and its research I love one of the best and how not everything turns out perfect or that it seems like they are going in a straight line towards being OP or something like that makes it much better

Seriously, people are obtuse, if they don't like something, don't read it, not because they complain, the author is going to change it, it's not their spoiled family member who turned them into the little tantrums they are now. Thank you author for the chapters, from my point of view they are excellent

Okay, cursed spirits are evil by nature, right? But what if they were bad at something specific? like naiades who try to drown you if they can but until they have the opportunity they are spoiled brats, things like that. It would be similar to how you have to use the fear of drowning to create a cursed tool, could you use, I don't know, the fear of killing to create a good cursed spirit? or simply positive energy or a balance of both energies

It would be great if the labyrinth in which the majority interacted was like the tutorial and that the real labyrinth connected with everywhere like the branches of the yggdrasil

You can make a fleet of small armored and fast ships with 1 or 2 cannons, they serve quite well to harass large ships and do substantial damage to the hull.

I don't doubt that Jinn can change shape at will, especially if Devas eats his restrictions.

Buena novela, aun no la leo por completo pero de momento va bien. Pddt: lo de mudarse a otros planetas no es nada viable en primer lugar para terraformar o hacer habitable un planeta se nececitan mas recursos que los que tiene la tierra, y aunque lo lograramos el campo electromagnetico de otro planeta nos enfermaria o algo peor ya que estamos adaptados al de la tierra.

like 39 degrees of heat??? one degree of difference is already dangerous and the normal is 35-37 degrees, go to the doctor mijo

susanoo = "el diablo"

With Voldemort's horcrux, theoretically he could curse him, right? And with a horcrux of voldishorts he could transfer the curse of the greengrass to Voldemort, right?

Just as a fact: the wood of the roots is a very different tissue than the branches and trunk, so you would have to root the church underground, although it could probably turn the tree into a spirit, cursed or blessed, whichever you prefer.

red berets

finally lily?