are the gods just going to be creation and destruction and nothing different.............................................................................
dunno why but I get the fill of twilight reading this /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
it's not good or trash it's just okay but making him the son of fate dunno why I just find it stupid and cringe...........................................
wish little jack was the mc..............................................................................................................................
am i the only one who hates seeing fireball in cultivation novel////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
do you still write this its been 7 months since the last update ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
i am a little b1tch because all the small stuff annoys the sh1t out of me like trying to merge Chinese and western culture together.......................
lol you say genius but why dose he not make a bout and travel to the kingdom across the sea they don't believe there is one 2 birds with 1 stone they will not find them and she could rebuild her strength in secret
2 stars out of 5 at the moment he just got his stuff and cultivated for a couple of days and already beat the people who have cultivated for years and he saves her and she like falls for him its to stupid
so the power you treat it the same as magic and named it mana core but why do you call it gallant force
is it it a mix of ,mana and spirit energy from Chinese novels
if your like me who hates people putting like fire ball and magic spells in Chinese martial arts novels this aint for you just started and he got no real practice and he becomes strong he i know her found some stuff but come on her had no practice and he knows how to control it
lol i am a newb i just wrote this so someone can take the orphanage idea and make a better one like when he reaches a certain level you can get the system to level it up the building itself because it would be a light hearted novel idea