Nah, ei can bonk him to ashes easily.. 🤣🤣

can you explain how so? there are many hypocrite MCs ive seen, some i hate and some i dont mind..

i dont think so, i dont really mind that, just go with your own flow bro, this fic is good.. and my comment is about another author, you know akikan? its one of his MC, the one he is currently writing 🤣🤣

Nah, he isnt really weak even in the earlier chapters, yes he is physically weak, but yknow because of his ability, you cant really call him weak... so yeah, im just saying this now because, just look at him now, fighting a GOD weekly/regularly 🤣🤣🤣

i remember a certain author where he made his MC quite a pervy guy but the author decided that a certain girl will not be a part of the harem because the author DONT like that girl, even though based on the personality of the MC it should be otherwise but no, just because the author didnt like the girl so she's not part of the harem.. so that part is kind of "wrong" because the MC didnt follow his character or personality just because the author didnt like the girl.. yknow what i mean? that kind of wrongness where the MC is kind of twisty because the author made his MC into that character or given him/her that kind of personality but suddenly the author didnt make his MC follow that character or personality just because there is something he didnt like, so the novel just go wrong because the MC is OOC.. 🤣🤣🤣

i still remember how the author kept saying how kenshin is weak in the earlier chapters... but now thinking about it, if you throw kenshin in soul society, he would be the new soul king 🤣🤣🤣🤣

contract directly preceded by morax? holy sheet 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I can agree that the translation is not indeed worthy of an absolute 5stars but i disagree with your 1star rating... ive seen many translation here in webnovel that are translated horribly, its like a direct google translation that destroys every structure of the sentence, even names are wrong sometimes, so i can absolutely say that this work is so much more better than the other translated works here in WN.. atleast reading this wont cause headache unlike the others 😅😅😅 (and the original of this work isnt even free, or i just didnt see the one thats free, i dunno how the translator here found the free one or maybe he just bought it using his money and translated it from russian to english)

nah, from what i remember its almost like a data where the esper got or determined their levels or their esper ability according to some super computer in academy city, i remember one girl from the group ITEM that can sense the personal reality of others, she's the sensor of the team and its her ability to locate or sense someone in the academy city, and no one can escape from her as long as they are an esper because all esper in academy city have a personal reality.. or maybe kamijou touma is the only exception because the power of his hand can deny all supernatural but im not sure, i already forgot most of the details from the novel 😅

even if his talent is trash, just with the system he can solo one piece in the future if he survives.. he doesnt need potential or training, he just needs to fish and accumulate rewards..

i read many novels like that and indeed yeah, there are brothels that indeed have prostitutes that serve costumers sexually but there are also others that i find weird at that time because its my first time seeing girls who work inside a brothel that dont sell their bodies but they are selling their art, like painting, tea ceremony, dancing, singing etc etc, so yeah, its interesting..

so you want to copy a typical japanese harem protagonist? those monkeys who appeared dense and flocked by girls at the start but dont do a fcking thing? or those hypocrit protagonist who doesnt want to break a girls heart so he just let them be and enjoy it but no official relationship but definitely some benefits, or maybe a guy flocked by girls but the guy is an insecure guy but also a hypocrit thinking he doest deserve to have a girlfriend so no official relationship but with girls with him left and right.. those kinds of protagonist and in the end of the story, they just picked one girl leaving the other girls heartbroken, and then the guy and the chosen girl lived happily ever after (except those heartbroken girls who despite with their MC for many years, still they are not chosen).. holy shit, writing these annoyances got me irritated... its fine to have just one girl in your story, its a no harem story if you want it to, but dont be a p*ssy and imitate those typical harem protagonist yeah? pick ONE or pick ALL, its as simple as that for those who wants no-harem or harem...

I see the original bro, author'd by synik.. ive seen many fics like this, a challenge by reptilia, it follows the same storyline, its free for all as long as the storyline is followed, you can write your own twist or add a plot as long as it doesnt ruin the storyline issued by the challenge... and this fic indeed the same as what you mentioned cuz i read the first chapter from the fanfiction.net.. and about the patreon, maybe this is the original author and just posted it here with different name? cuz no one would do that to someone else's work, right? or maybe im just drunk? 😅😅😅

Interesting start, no system and the mc dont have any knowledge of the one piece world, the only advantage he has is his hard work and his body (dunno what, but its implied that its unique).. so yeah, its great so dont drop this authorrr 👌👌

harem? yuri? ntr? bashing was already covered by the author in his sypnosis, and i dont enjoy bashing much, not a problem tho..

can someone tell me why vegapunk left that fruit in punk hazard? i stopped reading one piece, so i dunno the reason...

suzuki is 10 currently right? and nawaki died when he was 12 in canon.. so, im quite confused right now? can someone explain? or maybe im just drunk?

and i remember one marvel fic where the hulk in that earth is the world breaker hulk, tony as the iron man prime and a powerful thor variant... and whats crazy, is the author sent his mc in the marvel zombie earth.. also sent him to DC to fight an almost superman prime with darkseid possesing anti life equation, pure madness but an amazing fic 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Compare plagiarism to a man wanted worldwide in his previous world for being a hacker or a cyber terrorist that endangering the systems security of a country, confidential information, important data, political climate, missions, weapons development etc etc... now THINK, a cyber terrorist/hacker plagiarizing stories, do you think someone like that cares? i would rather plagiarize a story than to make countries all over the world hunt for my fckinnn head 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Ohhhh, nicee...