Child_of_Azathoth
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Child_of_Azathoth30dCommentéall of this nonsense could be stopped if slughorn told them that Snape tried to kill himself, it's a really good explanation for like 99% of his actions....
Dumbledore was determined to find out who this person was if not Snape. And he feared someone even more powerful emerging in this world, not wanting to face someone even worse than Voldemort.- Child_of_Azathoth1mthCommenté
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As I was retrieving my spears I heard little whimpers in the bush I stuck my bloody gloved hands into the bush grabbed three crying Harry bundles and pulled out. - Child_of_Azathoth1mthCommenté
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Ce livre a été supprimé. - Child_of_Azathoth7mthCommenté
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Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - Child_of_Azathoth7mthCommenté
I like the story so far, I generally hate harem stuff, but so far it had not bugged me. I love op mc stuff, would love to see him create some spells, but I'm sure that happens later on. keep up the good work, better then a lot of stories by new writers I have read.
Ch 65 Announcement - Child_of_Azathoth7mthPosté
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I'd remove that connection as well, like they can still get close as a family, no need for some magic forcing the subject.
This always happens that readers of my novels immediately hate one particular thing without waiting how it goes. I do have a plan (most of the time). - Child_of_Azathoth8mthCommenté••Raven
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