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Trying to get better at writing and making my novel Beasts: Reborn, into something incredible. Feel free to lmk how I’m doing.😤🤝

2020-04-01 JointUnited States
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    Répondu à JosephKNM

    It will be the same…… *****SPOILER SORT OF******* For volume one at least😈

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  • _Avatar0FFury_
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    Répondu à User_Name001

    !!! Do tell 😯

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  • _Avatar0FFury_
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    Répondu à User_Name001

    Hey man, thanks a ton for reading I’m glad you could find enjoyment. Since you’ve read up to the end and likely saw my last authors note, I always had plans for romance, and more seasons, but sometimes a story writes itself for you and the end isnt what you had planned. Marco in my mind was always going to go with Cora. They both had that cold killer nature , family trauma, with a surprisingly soft undertone and Marco had a decent relationship with Derek (which means a ton since he was yk). I felt they could both bring out that soft side of eachother if developed correctly and I was excited to do so. Unfortunately Marco living in my opinion took away from what was a pretty good full circle revenge story. (More than a few disagree unfortunately 😔) He didn’t get the girl, but he did get peace, for himself and his people and despite all my crazy boosted power scaling here, I believe there’s substance in reminding ppl that revenge will always at least take two in some way . Also I swear I removed the romance tag. I’ll check again, so sorry 🙏😭 Double also, new teenwolf fic otw!

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  • _Avatar0FFury_
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    Répondu à GOD_KING_AQUA

    *1000

    01 NIGHTMARE MOTIVATION.
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  • _Avatar0FFury_
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    Répondu à Bonb_Crusher

    It’s too early for freaky hours, family ! ☝🏽😀

    The week felt longer with a broken wrist. Claude couldn't do his usual fitness and training. He had to adjust. He had to ease up— conserve his energy, for what was to come. He even started dreaming about monstrous armored snakes with bladed whips for tails and poisonous iron-chunk swords for teeth. He'd never had to conserve his energy before.
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    Répondu à Bop_

    The legend 🔥

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  • _Avatar0FFury_
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    This chapter felt very teenwolf coded— but in a good way. Adam feels like your run of the mill laid back mc. I’m excited to see what you do with him and the new girl. Based on your synopsis you could draw up some interesting story beats. Thanks for writing, I hope you keep going ✋🙂‍↕️

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    Sir/Maam ! We gotta break up the text into paragraphs. It’s far more digestible and allows readers to comment on specific moments which drives up your interraction!

    In the small town of Moonstone, where werewolf legends were as common as the latest TikTok trends and mysteries lurked around every corner, another day dawned with its usual blend of excitement and intrigue. Moonstone, with its eerie charm and spooky tales, was the perfect backdrop for adventures both real and imagined.
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    Répondu à Bop_
    Ce paragraphe a été supprimé.
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  • _Avatar0FFury_
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    Répondu à JosephKNM

    Ah thanks so much! The goal is something new and refined but equally familiar. Sounds to me like that’s what you’re getting from this so mission accomplished so far! Next chapt today! 🫡

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    Répondu à JosephKNM

    Yes! There’s an epicyon crossbreed at the workplace ✋🫢

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  • _Avatar0FFury_
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    Répondu à NLinCH

    Yo! It’s great to have you back man. I’m excited to get out some good chaps so you have something to dive into after finals. Best of luck! I hope you get the results you’ve worked towards.

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  • _Avatar0FFury_
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    Répondu à NLinCH

    🫡🫡🫡☝🏽

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  • _Avatar0FFury_
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    Hello everyone! Obligatory author review. Im trying this Beasts: Reborn thing again. Three years ago I was a very different writer and person. Not a bad thing, but along the way I picked up some new skills and decided to adjusted the foundational elements of what I created. So here we are. Beasts: Reborn (Revamped). With this edition, I’m aiming for more defined arcs/volumes with quicker pacing more character realism/depth and a better balance of both positivity and darkness. In doing this, I’m also working hard not to stray from what garnered me readers in the first place. Feel free to lmk how I’m doing! If you dropped it before, pick it back up. Now. If you read to the end and are here for more, thank you and hope you enjoy. NO HAREM. NO NTR. MUCH VIOLENCE. Extra tags: Vampire, Magical realism, History, Revolution, apocalypse, academy (in part). Thanks for checking out my work and have a good day!

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  • _Avatar0FFury_
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    Répondu à DaoistNox

    Thanks a bunch for sticking with me on this journey. Funny timing, I’m dropping the first chapter to the rewrite today lmaoooo

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  • _Avatar0FFury_
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    Répondu à VOID_321

    Yep. But I get the feeling you won’t have a good time reading anyway if you found my other novels pacing to slow. This is even slower paced technically and if you’re irritated reading by chapter 7 I’d tell you go no further. I’ve found that ppl trying to force themselves to some imagined better point just births hate reading and resentment. No hard feelings! 🫶

    It was like his body was reacting before his eyes could witness the disturbance. Correction. Not his body, his senses.
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    Répondu à VOID_321

    That would make zero sense considering my x men fic is from Bronte’s pov for 4 straight volumes

    It was like his body was reacting before his eyes could witness the disturbance. Correction. Not his body, his senses.
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    "Dreaded locks of hair like tendrils falling down to his chest. Some adorned with shining silver hair cuffs, others left to fall freely over his steroid-shoulders. Dark mahogany skin. Thick eyebrows, pensive eyes that don't fit his face and a slim beak-like nose (looks like it's been broken) that leads down to a set of full lips....but mine are better. All in all, his features match with where he's from."
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    Répondu à VOID_321

    She is not

    Mr. Westover forced a fake smile to mask his discomfort as he addressed the young woman at the front of the class, "Ah perfect! Everyone else's got a partner and has started the ice-breaker….So, Lydia why don't you pair up with Marco at the back for me?"
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  • _Avatar0FFury_
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    Répondu à KOD_SANTANA

    Aye man, sometimes you gotta pop out and show 🥷🏽. ✋😭😭😭😭😭

    "No. Nope. I'm tripping." He thought before letting the music spill from his headphones.
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