thanks for the honest review in the beginning I just wanted to just put something out without any prior writing experience later noticed how fast paced the book was I'll try slowing down and adding more details to make it more detailed and interesting

if you read more you'll find out I don't really mention the system that much which is why i made it a simulation system it's not mentioned much

This is a nice story a well crafted storyline and characters eager to see how dragon lord and Yara bonds

nice flashback Bryan's slow and low on confidence should've told her how he felt right there

wow this is nice it's clear they still love each other and its's funny they both try to deny it 😂

This is intriguing, love how the story develops and the writing quality is top notch keep it up author and please update more

Thanks for the review I started writing this book on a whim without any prior experience or thoughts of writing I just had an idea to put something I liked out for other's to enjoy if possible Looking back to my previous chapters, I've also seen how fast the book has progressed and I'll try slowing it down And if you have any ideas on what would be nice to add you could also let me know Thanks a lot and I hope you enjoy reading it

Yeah, that was when they felt he might not get the chance to be successful but I also wrote that they also supported him

this is a must read book I like that it's well written and I like the characters in it nice work author

This is nice Never believed I'll find this hidden gem it's worth the read Nice book author and keep updating

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I won't be shameless this time I've always loved books about necromancy and after searching and reading a lot i haven't enjoyed most of them So I felt like sharing my ideas here Read and possibly enjoy guys it's a crude story but I hope y'all like it ✌🏾

Been searching for books like this and finally found this after reading lots of them Its's a nice book I hope you keep updating

I'm glad you are enjoying it I'll keep updating as fast as I can

in case of other mistakes I might have missed out on don't hesitate to let me know Thanks for reading ❤️

Thanks for pointing it out It was an oversight

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nice book i love it check out my book also Rise of the prodigy

thanks for the chapter hi guy if you like soccer books too check out Rise of the Prodigy (New)

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