Sasha_Reaper
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I love Fate.
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Sasha_Reaper5dCommentéCh 90 Chapter 90: Demon on the loose- Sasha_Reaper6dCommentéCh 66 Mahiro, President Is Calling You! — Part 2
- Sasha_Reaper11dCommentéCh 104 Chapter 104 Kara's Dilemma
- Sasha_Reaper20dCommentéCh 97 Chapter 97 His Soul Makes Me Sick
- Sasha_Reaper29dCommentéCh 104 [104] The Best Old Man Is Back!
- Sasha_Reaper1mthCommentéCh 92 [92] Look, But Don't Eat
- Sasha_Reaper1mthCommentéCh 82 [82] Shock and Awe
- Sasha_Reaper2mthCommentéCh 141 [141] Congratulatory Honeymoon? Or a Battle More Dangerous?
- Sasha_Reaper2mthRépondu à The_ArkhonCh 66 [66] He's Still Alive
- Sasha_Reaper2mthCommentéCh 66 [66] He's Still Alive
- Sasha_Reaper2mthCommentéCh 60 Chapter 60 Wonder Woman Is Alive, Breaches Everywhere
- Sasha_Reaper2mthCommentéCh 41 40. Lilja means Lily
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- Sasha_Reaper3mthCommentéCh 39 [39] The Best Gift in the World
- Sasha_Reaper3mthCommentéCh 52 Chapter 52 Bruno Mannheim, Traitor
- Sasha_Reaper3mthCommentéCh 16 016
- Sasha_Reaper3mthCommentéCh 498 498: The Overlay; the Merge of Dreams and Reality
- Sasha_Reaper3mthCommentéCh 25 [25] Living is for Peace of Mind
- Sasha_Reaper3mthPosté
I can say that I liked the story, but I found the second half less engaging than the first. Especially the Graveyard arch (I call it that, a bit boring for me). In terms of problems, I would probably highlight the grammar. I read through a translator, but occasionally there are moments where the text sits. And so I want to thank you for this story and hope that your next fanfic will be even better).
- Sasha_Reaper3mthCommentéCh 492 492: The Hundred-Year War