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You're right. I'll delete those chapters as soon as I have time, is that okay?
again, your comment is too long. sorry, I won't read all. but about Lust, she believes what other made for her, but I always gave hints that there were things wrong about her past, you just didn't know how to see the details
I'm not even sure if you takling about lust because I wont' read your full comment, but Lust was virgin before the MC (spoiler), and all she remember is part of past life of other "Lust" demons. But don't mind, just drop the novel since not all MC's wives are gonna be virgins.
Soon. I'm working on them right now.
is ENG your main language for real?
Jex and Clara communicated with the other members of the Sapphire crew through communicators installed on the ship, from which the AI called Echo created a 3D image of the captain and his right-hand man, Javier (aka the man you wanted the MC to kill), where this same man became angry and spoke rudely to Clara, in which situation the mysterious man with white hair saw and heard Javier acting like this and in turn became angry... I think I'm not doing a good job writing the novel since you don't seem to understand it... is your English good? Mine isn't, so maybe it's my fault
oh, that guy cursed through communicators, not face to face, so MC couldn't do anything. And he still doesn't understand the human language fully, but he's learning fast and will soon speak it. for now, not speaking it gives him a mysterious tone
Excuse me, who is not dead and who cannot speak? Your question has me confused
No. The romance focus will always be the harem and future harem members.
it will be a mystery for while, for now he looks human with white eyes and hair