JKaiya

Starting chaps were too cliche/cringe 　　 　, -∧,,∧-- 、 　　　/ (-ω-｀ )　/ 　　 r-くっ⌒cソ、 / 　 ノ '、 , 、 _, ' / / .（_,. 　　　 　 ././ ,(.,_ ｀'ー-、_,,..ノ/ 　　~`''ー--‐'

Both of the two big Chinese cooking novels have problems... but if I had to chose one over the other, it'd be the other one due to a little better translation and also better story development.

, -∧,,∧-- 、 　　　/ (-ω-｀ )　/ 　　 r-くっ⌒cソ、 / 　 ノ '、 , 、 _, ' / / .（_,. 　　　 　 ././ ,(.,_ ｀'ー-、_,,..ノ/ 　　~`''ー--‐' 　　 　, -∧,,∧-- 、 　　　/ (-ω-｀ )　/ 　　 r-くっ⌒cソ、 / 　 ノ '、 , 、 _, ' / / .（_,. 　　　 　 ././ ,(.,_ ｀'ー-、_,,..ノ/ 　　~`''ー--‐'

The setting is very interesting and what kept me reading, but the story can definately be better written. It is also slow paced. 6 chapters in nothing has happened yet other than constant explaining that he is suppossed to be a npc on a farm but is not. The writing quality seemed pretty *******ish

I mean u spammed 5 different replies in a short time before u settled on 1... so yeah pretty sure your the same guy. Btw, for future reference, WN shows a user whenever theyre replied to / liked. They can still read the replies even if its deleted, though others wont be able to so u dont have to worry about that. Also its strange how that account did the same exact thing you did. Even the grammar / writing style is the same. It was even spammed and deleted, which seems oddly familiar... Hm... Cant put my mind to it. Very weird. Anyways, I see y u deleted as I myself dont get it, but why would I get a hacker..? Also why would you even ask to get hacked... I'm guessing you're not an *****, but you should know getting hacked is illegal and bad... Not to mention your inkstone account can transfer your income and WN cant probably do much about it till its too late assuming they are smart enough to time it. I just dont get it... Also hacking for the most part doesnt work like that. In the future though, please take longer before you reply, as honestly you're just further proving you are the same person. Grammar, hate, spam, deleting. Plus why did it take you so long to notice a direct reply and respond to the alt but pretty much instantaniously spam me when I didnt even reply to you on accident :/ Think about decisions before u act please

1. You wouldnt keep replying if u werent the author / the alt. 2. You literally created a fresh acc whose only activity was a 5 star rev on your novel which knew the plot with 0 secs/mins/hours read, 0 books tried/read but knowing the plot and quality of the novel, and the also commenting on this review. If you at least used another excuse such as "I am his friend" or even had at least a little bit of activity on something else before u did it, I would've probably believed. But after I called you out, you started to magically have activity and then reviewed Astral Pets which was likely what this was inspired by. 3. I honestly dont really care if authors make alts to boost your novel, as lots of times it is real people such as family or friends, not to mention lots of people try to abuse the system when they make a new novel, however, it's another thing to make a brand new alt acc and basically the first thing you do is reply to a negative review and act morally just. Not to mention the spam you did from the moment I woke up to sleeping and even starting to spam on the novels I dropped a long time ago that are on this acc. I am thankful though that you stopped after a day as notification spam every 30mins-hour was annoying. 4. Im not low enough to spam 1 star revs just cause I didnt enjoy your story, nor check to see if the novel is getting 5 star spammed by a same person or new accs, but I am low enough to come back if my rev is ever deleted as I got tired of authors deleting my reviews because I didnt threat them since I tend to give more 3 star ish reviews since Im picky and 3 star range is what I consider average. When it is an original novel, I try to write out everything I didnt like about it so the minority of authors that do care and want feedback that they basically never get, get it. I'm not targeting you, I only came back due to the reply and happened to click the acc when I saw it was lvl 1 then discovered how freaking suspicious it was. If you hadnt kept spamming then there wouldnt be this much replies / traction to the review, not to mention it probably wouldve doubled if you didnt start spamming on the old novels I gave up on this acc instead of this review.

the guy also 1starred all my novels lol, also thanks for replying or I wouldve never known this guy would reply to himself with his main acc 😂

lol, honestly not surprised with WN though, they don't care about copyrights unless they get sued, then the blame is shifted onto the author and not the platform. For example Top Celebrity although isn't a hard copy like this, it basically copied the whole exact plots from 2 novels and only changed the names of the characters / places. Yet that hit top ranks and even got sponsored pretty heavily by WN so... yep

Another cliched cultivation flick without anything unique .

It was pretty interesting at the start, and I really liked the 2 main side characters. However, it started getting boring after a while due to the repetitive plot structures and somewhat bleak and dull atmosphere of the dungeon. The story lacked descriptions and thoughts, reminding me as if this was instead a diary of a character's actions in a video game. Most of the chapters after he got settled in the dungeon was literally that, stating actions and improvements. With the lost flair from the starting chapters which were prettt interesting into this filler like writing, I got bored and finally dropped it. If you do however give this a try, I suggest only reading on WebNovel after you read what the old translator had went to so u do not waste money as compared to every other novel on the site, it became premium very early at C14 when the newer ones all start at C40 for pay to read