ReadingFiend

Each of you, put on one of these bracelets.

pout —> put on

Talked —> Spoken The verb to talk takes a direct object, i.e talk TO someone/talk ABOUT someone. In this case, you are indirectly referencing the person who has been talking (technically the subject is what was said and not WHO said it) so the verb to speak is used. ‘Spoken like’ is a very commonly used English phrase

as long as Tana is free to do {rest is fine}

Yuna —> Yuan

Change has is to just is (remove the word has).

Your theory is that next, the key to the next level… You need a comma to break up the phrases. I had to read the sentence a couple time to properly get it as my mind autocorrected while reading.

Own instead of won.

Re-reading and I cackle every time. Raon is just evil. A perfect example of him being more devilish than Wrath or anyone in the Devildom. I really do look forward to what would happen if Raon ever went there one day.

yep, its unfinished