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der_taube8mthCommentéCh 51 Assassin- der_taube8mthCommentéCh 42 A lovely night R-18
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- der_taube8mthCommentéCh 3 Idle System
- der_taube8mthCommentéCh 2 House of Victory
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Hi, Welcome to this brand new story of mine. I hope you enjoy reading it along the way. I will try to keep the story entertaining and juicy for you all, but I just hope and will appreciate if you were to take out a minute of your time and post comments at the end of each chapter. It will be a great source of insight for me. - der_taube2yrRépondu à Xuefang1Ch 125 And it's a company retreat
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The start ia nice. Hopefully it might turn out to be a good story. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Ce livre a été supprimé. - der_taube2yrRépondu à Fa11enGr1mCh 1 The Nightmare
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- der_taube2yrCommentéCh 64 I'm ready...
- der_taube2yrCommenté
Now that's some disease.
"It's 'Over the top-hyper imaginative-boredom' syndrome," - der_taube2yrPosté
The story may have some similarities with others but the core idea and character's personality looks original. The grammer is way above many. The stability of chapters is kind of OP, I don't think that it will last though. Overall, the story is far better than many with a lot of growth for the characters. I hope the author keeps up with the great update. Good luck going forward.