NaphtaIi

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Love creating things, stories and music. However I'm also a writer, check out my work you might like it.

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NaphtaIi4 years ago
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Very interesting start! Don't be shy let's have some more!!!
Ch 1 Am I Thor?!
I'm Thor?!
Fantaisie · Lord_Breezy
NaphtaIi4 years ago
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although i love it so far I don't know if they would use those curse words. If you use those already in Star Wars that'll be great!
When I arrive the door opens before I even walk up to it. "Val, you brown haired basic looking motherfucker how are you ?" The sarcasm practically drips from his mouth. "I'm good you spiky headed fuck but credits are getting short and I need another job." I can't help but smile seeing this short person they call a man.
Star Wars The New Republic
Adolescents et jeunes adultes · LoftyDreams
NaphtaIi4 years ago
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Good job on this one!
The aura of my saber then grows cold and hostile, and desperate? At this point, my expression is stone cold. This is not the Order that I had sworn to serve, that I had dedicated my life to. I raise my knee from the ground and face Windu with a look of disgust, but try to keep my tone polite, "Master Windu, I must ask that you please allow me to keep my lightsaber, this lightsaber is unlike most, it has become like a piece of me, I must ask you to please allow me to keep it."
The Bastard Jedi
Anime et bandes dessinées · DaoistShinobi
NaphtaIi4 years ago
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I don't know about this because I don't think anyone in their right mind would convict someone just because they were a apart of something that changed to being bad later on, however the Jedi were blind so I'll let it pass.
All in favor of expelling Eren from the Jedi Order for crimes against the Jedi including but not limited to, murder, slaughter of fellow Jedi, use of the darkside, excessive violence, disobeying the Jedi Code, and Corruption. Please raise your hand."
The Bastard Jedi
Anime et bandes dessinées · DaoistShinobi
NaphtaIi4 years ago
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I don't think he says "hmmm," all the time but aight
"Jedi knight from over five millenia ao you are hmmm. Very young but fought in many battles you have hmmm. The ability to use Force Ice you have hmmm. Correct this is?" The man asks.
The Bastard Jedi
Anime et bandes dessinées · DaoistShinobi
NaphtaIi4 years ago
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It's that guy Kenobi 🙏🏾
I'm now standing a a large circular room with window lining the wall in the room, twelve seats line the walls in a half moon. In the middle sits a small green man, to his right a man in his late forties who had dark skin and a bald head. On the other side of yoda sits a man with a clean cut beard and incredible hair, if I had a girlfriend I would definitely have to hide him from her.
The Bastard Jedi
Anime et bandes dessinées · DaoistShinobi
NaphtaIi4 years ago
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Love how you made her very curious almost to the point of annoyance, it is very much like her when I first saw her!
"So um, what was it like? Back then, the war against the Sith and all." She asks curiously.
The Bastard Jedi
Anime et bandes dessinées · DaoistShinobi
NaphtaIi4 years ago
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thanks for the chapter, hope to see longer ones tho 😄
Ch -16 A New Era
The Bastard Jedi
Anime et bandes dessinées · DaoistShinobi
NaphtaIi4 years ago
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I'll assume his name is Dagger haha
"Dageer... Dageer. Thank you sir! I will be sure to tell him."
Broke: A Clone Wars Tale (Star Wars)
Films · Reis123
NaphtaIi4 years ago
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omg piell is in here
"Talking with General Piell can be worse than fighting a thousand droids."
Broke: A Clone Wars Tale (Star Wars)
Films · Reis123

Age of Spirit

In a world driven by its survival, the Protectorate Initiative has parents have every teenager with significant powers enlist in their Defense Units. Jydo Karte finds he has no powers and struggles to maintain his love for his disappointed father and the new peers he has befriended. Follow Jydo and his newfound society to grand adventures against the society that abandoned him and many others. - Characters: Jydo Karte Wise Talon Claudius Teregh Nia Nusk Prime Bathilda - 2020 Naphtali

NaphtaIi · Action

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Kema: A Star Wars Story

After the Jedi trials find Kema unfit she works to become a Jedi Guardian. On the way she also has to stop a traitor who she loved dearly. Right after becoming guardian she deals with the Jedi Purge, missing friends and an old reunion becoming Jedi Consular at the end. Cast: Kema Kordall/Corde Xido Dival/Sirlin Jysell Harik/Enraga Kai Zena Dolpho/Lady Talle Enodo Ifedi CT-1212 (Goldie) Yu'sarai Bothka Yoda Expect 3 chapters a week; up to 1.5K words/chapter. Feedback and suggestions are welcome, even important lol. **NOTE**: I DO NOT own Star Wars, Disney does! Only my character and the plotline behind it. Some plots concur with the Prequel trilogy, which I also do not own!

NaphtaIi · Romance

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Royebin: A Star Wars Story

Jon a former Sith and stormtrooper battles Padraw, his former master who looks to gain respect over deaths of trillions. Main Characters: Jon Royebin Lam Nassau Lord Padraw Erne Corasta Robot/B3-ZX7 Bothka Recurring: Kema Namun Enodo Ifedi Jasu'lane Nirvara Expect 3 chapters a week; up to 1.0K words/chapter. Feedback and suggestions are welcome, even important lol. **NOTE**: I DO NOT own Star Wars, Disney does! This isn't something that pays me so yeah! It's just for fun!

NaphtaIi · Romance

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