Moe_Cyan_Pile

what the bloody damn. I'm really sorry about that. I have no power when it comes to that. all I can say now is that I'm disappointed at Webnovel.

Wait, I didn't know about this. Is this on all chapters or just some? If it is all, then I'd like to apologize as this is out of my control. I don't set things up when it comes to that. Webnovel does.

Shameless Author review 5 star. Thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed. Also thanks to the people that supported this. It is greatly appreciated.

Hello. Moe here. I won't be sweet talking since I'd like to give out a honest opinion on this. My overall total score for this would be a 3.0. As stated by the others, the writing quality... simply just ruins it a lot. Improper placements of periods, comas, exclamations, and the like. Grammar problems and sentence structure being all over the place. I'm telling this now, even Grammarly won't save this. The reason is simple. the writing style that is seemed to be here would be something like akin to that of a script. When one reads a script, it would often be stiff. Because it is written with the intention to perform, not to read. This is like that in a lot of cases. A quick suggestion to fix this is to read other people's works first. See how it is written, structured, and styled. After that, try to implement it to your work. then compare. Another reason why i said that Grammarly may not even save it is because, based on where you want to place your writing. It appears to be a mix of first person and third person. And as Grammarly stands, it sucks at recognizing that. With that point done the other points can then follow suite. Since the writing quality is the main issue. If that has a problem, story development, character design, and world background then get's affected. Overall souring the reader's experience and causing them to may drop the work for another. If that can be fixed, then my rating may change. But for now, it stands to stay on this number.

The writing quality that, i can improve on and your other point as well. but sadly. i don't decide the prices. Webnovel does. each chapter is written on 2000 - 2100 words each. webnovel places a coin each 200 words. Sorry, but i really can't change the prices for the chapter.

yeah I know it's slow. can't help it since college projects gotta go first

an actually good loophole. has the same energy as naming an agricultural company as Samsung.

English and Grammar is appropriate. Minimum errors on all current chapters which is good. As it does not have that much chapters, an appropriate review for plot, character, and world background would not be given. However, for a beginning, it would be overall be better than an good amount of works already. Keep up the good work. Happy writing!

thank you for noticing this error

one word, contract it will be republished soon.