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Prateek_Mishra_4850

Prateek_Mishra_4850

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2019-12-12 JointGlobal
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  • Prateek_Mishra_4850
    Prateek_Mishra_4850a month ago
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    The story is very rushed. The guy just keeps jumping from one challenge to another barely scraping most of the time. There is not much character buildup of the female leads, side characters, etc. It also seems like the author did not want to invest time in character profile make up, how attributes increase, difference in skills, etc. The story had potential but the execution was not done properly .