abyss_of_darkness

To be honest too many loopholes, just to make mc character development u shows him mentally like a child , without making him think like a child u can make a very good novel . without a connection to the character how can u have people liking him in a fanfiction without making a new story. U can't

its too much foolish to say it out load , it only creates more problems like how do u know everything and the demon is with them in that place it surely would know what they are talking about .,its a surefire way to die, too many loopholes here ,

All the acquired misfortune in the world can be accounted to the incapability of the person involved.

Its more like that lovers problem as well as queens problem because of them so much death happened in those fiction worlds , , if someone is not strong enough and they cannot subjugate everyone obviously everyone would search for power to rule , the same happened when Alexander The Great died . MC thought are good but here is another point that humans are same as those creature why be angry with them when someone else is responsible for all the chaos , either give them the queen or kill her problem solved.

height of foolishness and irresponsibility

MC will have a terrible end , I can tell by the name only. Maybe death will be a blessing .

I don't know what u want to write , it looks like random story where si just follows the trend nothing new same thing just repeat. You could have written good fanfic without him joining the same mcu storyline ,

all the things are manipulated by those who reign supreme in those universe , there is no coincidence that he thinks of becoming peter parker after consuming him

what the fuck , why become rimaru then peter parker , what shit is this

@ author , no beast eats their food near their nest as it will attract predators to their nest