One piece +1

Why doesn't he use the predator's ability to become stronger?

The problem is the speed of events and the unnecessarily slow romance. MC did not recognize the Avengers and arrived to fight Thanos.

He's got a lot of healing potions, I think.

I don't know why you would make him so careful if he was doing reckless things at the same time. It means that he lost his eye in a battle to gain experience instead of making him stronger. I mean, look at Merium, only with his body, he can fight Nitro, and he has the right system to increase his strength.

Well the MC is starting to make me feel like he has an orphanage anyone he sees makes him affiliate

Why don't you write us information about his system?

Sorry, I won't complete MC. It feels like he's weighing on the crew instead of helping them

Isn't MC Naruto supposed to not tell Mizuki and intervene after Naruto stole the secret scroll to kill Mizuki?

Isn't it better to get martial arts and weapons from a dungeon than make it look like the MC got them by chance?

Why not create a dungeon? This is a special ability for the player to level up because there are no dungeons in the Avatar World

Thanks for the chapter

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Keep plotting great but don't make the MC pessimistic like he always says how do you want me to do this as the MC doesn't seem to like trying to do anything

I can hardly stand a gossip MC now he has a gossip system with him

Tengo una alerta, no hagas a MC como un cerdo corriendo detrás de las chicas sin siquiera reconocerlas. Simplemente ayudó al hermano de Su Yan y fue a confesarle su amor. ¿No es extraño que ella no estuviera molesta con él?

Keep going but don't make the MC too emotional like what happened with the system I feel like it would be too much

I just want him to balance the two

I began to lose interest in the novel, the hero is lazy and despite his strength, he does not care about Cultivation and crosses the boundaries by thinking only about women all the time