CrimsonThunder
Rich young master with a Law abiding family. I live in Tijuana Mexico. I have six white horses named Juan and I am currently trying to buff them up and transform into Omega Juan (see profile pic).
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CrimsonThunder1mthPosté- CrimsonThunder8mthRépondu à Ehnvy
Meh reasoning, but goes well with your story.
"Please!" Ace knelt on the ground. "There has to be something I can do to make Soma join! I'll do it!" - CrimsonThunder2yrRépondu à NullDrago
No, he was just thinking about it.
'Does he think of himself as Dumbledore, no one has the right to make me kneel, maybe Dumbledore, but that child has just pissed off the whole school with this single stunt. And if they all march in there to kill him, I wouldn't be surprised.' - CrimsonThunder2yrCommenté
It would have been better if he hasked for the intelligence of a galvan.
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Let me ask you a question no one is asking. Why name the fic Gamer system, when it has 0 presence in the first 6 chapters.
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I want to tell you that the siblings' relationship is perfect, and you can take the story far with their interactions. You don't need characters from the story to make it interesting. If you still want to be nosey and try to change Ichigo's life, but remember this, it will have no advantage because Isshin will still be alive and most readers will leave if you force a romantic plot. Anyway, it's your story write it however you like, I will still be reading it, cause I am enjoying it.
Ch 20 Kidnapping - CrimsonThunder2yrCommenté
It's good that she was ro@ped when she had such a good and capable son like you, she deserved it for giving birth to you.
"Well, anyways, thanks for this pleasure. If you hadn't stolen my money, then your mother wouldn't have been raped. It's all your fault.." - CrimsonThunder2yrCommenté
I was lost once, I didn't panic, I enjoyed two Ice-creams, bought some balloons, and then my mother found me. She said, "come let's go home" in a very relaxed manner. I think either she trusted me to do well on my own, keep in mind that I am the middle child, so she may have just forgotten about me.
A little boy, who had just turned 9, was running along the night streets of London. His face showed fear and fatigue. He had been running around for the past 2 hours. He had gotten lost when he lost grip on his mom's hand while watching a parade on the street. - CrimsonThunder2yrCommenté
This surprisingly isn't cringe.
„If you are in the wrong I'll scold you and even beat you up but I'd still be on your side and guard your back no matter against whom." - CrimsonThunder2yrRépondu à grimmhorizon
- CrimsonThunder2yrRépondu à Arescet
Yeah, I understand the frustration when a mc doesn't have a good or relatable name.
■Leonidas. - CrimsonThunder2yrRépondu à hammody836Ch 8 Obey R18.
- CrimsonThunder2yrRépondu à Arescet
Oh his middle name will remain the same, but don't worry I will play it off in such a way that you won't find ot awkward.
■Leonidas. - CrimsonThunder2yrRépondu à lassfried
Wait, let me check, if this is true, then this changes everything!
A/N: Sexy times coming, I just love when a female dominates a Shota, he will not get his dick hard and have sex as a five-year-old, but there will be other fun. Can you guys suggest some innovative restrictions, I will certainly appreciate them. - CrimsonThunder2yrCommenté
Why is he so easygoing? If I remember correctly didn't he kill the two pink aliens for threatening his life and here Vegeta was attempting to kill his family alongside the city and he is still in a good mood. There is a limit of how relaxed a person can be, but our MC is a carpet rug and has become comfortable with people stepping on him so this sithation doesn't apply to a carpet rug.
Ch 30 Chapter 30 - CrimsonThunder2yrRépondu à Sherlockkkkkk
Yeah, the clapping dude has it.
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