Vanbun

Felt like it hasn’t end… it seem like it’s missing something still

This couple move fast! why does it feel like the author is just trying to wrap up everything and not rrally going into detail…

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Another unfinish story that said complete…. Will they ever complete this comic

Lol he gave a a definition

The story started out very interesting and it kept me hook for while then I kinda drop it cuz the FL and ML is lacking too much communication and it was just the same problem over and over. Eventually the story start developing and you do see the growth of the chacrcter but it was still lacking. The story got stretch out so much that there was no actual complete/ consequences of the problem that the character was dealing with. for instance; 1.what happen to Gu Jingze’s dad after he return to the family? What did he start doing? Or when he suddenly start missing and Gu jingze went to go look for him and return without him? 2.how did the couple deal with xue mengqi after the incident? 3. All the other couple need more story development and how their feeling started to grow 4. Why did they yun family hated the Gu family so much that they plot from so early on yet they want their daughter to married into the Gu family? That doesn’ make sense 5. How did Lin Che’s mother even end up with the Lin family? And when she came back she didn’t even go visit her mother til her funeral. Overall it was interesting but story development is lacking.. the ending felt so rush with a few chapters of each couple and not the overall ending.

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Yes it’s in the app under the Genius Doctor black belly miss :)

The overview sound interesting but I as read more it just get boring and no development. I actully got up to chapter 520 before I call it quits even though I did jump a few chapter as well. The storyline Is a bit unrealistic since the FL is so innocent and naive yet the grandpa see the potential in her and know that she would be prefect for his grandson and force them to get married. For a cold ceo the ML is a bit naive too, he said he had eye on her from the start but was indifference since ge already has a gf during the time. The more I read the more I see that this story was stretch out so much. The author try to add to many plot and idea to it to keep it cute and sweet whole using a typical theme but wanted it to be different somehow, yet it lack character and plot development. it’ll be nicer if the author can go in depth about the FL work itself and be more descriptive about the design and setting. It need better transition flow from one problem to the next. Overall it’s a potential novel but definitely need to editing work

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